I'm going to need another installment of this to tell me why Heero had to die. I didn't read tortured love as being the primary motive so much as the current dilemma. Trowa has the skills (and patience) to find a more subtle means of sabotaging 1xR, should he wish it. So what were they involved in? Great oneshot. Very intriguing!

Oh my gosh, I had this inkling feeling Trowa had something to do with Heero's death, but my gosh, what a plot twist. And I loved how the hints were so subtle that you can hardly spot them until it was revealed at the end. Bravo! Poor Heero, so unsuspecting, but for some reason, I didn't even hate Trowa at all. It's just so tragic and sad and ugh! So many feels!

brutally beautiful!

i didn't see that coming. the twist i mean. i love both 1xR and 3xR so this much stands as a 'package'.

write more!

This story is so intense...it feels so real...i've read this many times now but it still affects me the way it did when i first read this..just amazing..I esp. love the last line..."She was worth it. Losing his soul. His self-respect..."

I feel bad for Heero, though..I just can't seem to fathom what would happen if Relena found out..she'd feel so deprived and betrayed.

Great job! Cheers!

O_O

Damn... Did not see that coming...at all. I'm going to call you Optimus Prime from now on, because that ending hit me like a mack truck. Great twist!

Well I'll be damned! I'm a BIG Heero/Lena fan, but Trowa is defidently the next best canidate. This story is wonderful! yes, I feel kind of sick to my stomach that Trowa went the the lengths of KILLING Heero to get to Relena but I stop and mentally kick myself. Cause the phantom of the opera (erik) does the same and I love him! Er...anyways...This was great! Go dramatic angsty love!

even before he was snapped out of his flashback thing, i KNEW Trowa had killed Heero. urgh, portraying Trowa as evil. ah well, you're the author, plus it's different from other stories ]

OMG! THAT KICK ASS! sorry for the french...but omg that was so awesome! well done...Trowa being a sexy murderer to get the girl he wanted...*drools*

I remember reading this forever ago, but stumbling across it again was wonderful. This was creepy, but in an awesome way. I love this story.

That was one weird story, huH? But it's a nice story.. a story so close to reality.. although I believe that Trowa wouldn't do something like that no matter how hopeless the situation is.. Especially not to his friend.. But I do like your idea of pairing Trowa and Relena.. next to Heero he's the guy that I always wanted for Relena to end up with.. Hope you make another fic story of Trowa and Relena.. with a Heero/Relena/Trowa love triangle.. Keep up the good work! Hugs and Kisses!

...wow...
The introduction really freaked me out. I was waving my hands and yelling "no way, not my Trowa!"
I like TB/RP pairings, always have but this fic... this stands out.
(Excuse me while I cough up my heart) I thought Trowa would have confessed- oh oh great idea just popped in my head.
How about a sequel and he tells her the truth but she still loves him... or not
I drank gov't water and am listening to 'maybe you'll be there' by Diana Krall, excuse the slip of sanity.

I don't know what to say...that was...amazing...truly original and well written...I give it 4 stars and 1/2 ..._
Amanda

Nice twist...

dude that was an awsome twist!

good work!

Love your twist in the story. I wasn't expected that, Wow Trowa the villain cool. Good story.