i love love the honesty, the love and simplicity of it all.

This was really great. You portrayed Chi-Chi's feelings well.

Great story. Chi chi does get a bad rap in the show but all of us smart folk knows that she really cares.

That was so incredibly sweet, especially the ending. Awesome job!

I love it! (L)

Aw, very sweet, I love insights into characters' relationships, and this one was well-written. Keep up the good work!

~illegiblewriter

Goodness...thanks SO much for giving Chi-Chi some depth. She's actually one of my favorite characters of Dragon Ball Z. Everyone always depicts as this heartless bitch, but in truth she totally stressed out. This story has so much meaning behind it. Thank you for writing it.

AW AW AW That was so cute! I almost cried with her, oi oi great work (*lacking more words*) *sigh* cute...

That was finally gets to say what she's been wanting to.

You know what? that was so sweet and kinda sad to. I'm glad Goku heard her or she would be breaking her heart and telling him her feelings without him knowing. That would have been aweful. Great fic. It was good to read!

Wow, this was so sweet and cute, it's an amazing story and your an amazing writer, keep up the great work I can't wait to read more of your stories! Great job! _

awe that was one of the most sweetest and truest fics i've ever read and keep up the good work :)

*sniff sniff* so cute, so sad, but i loved it so much...

Wow..that's so sweet...well done on the writing part

Oh...that was so sweet. Are you going to continue this? Gosh can't end it there, it's so cute, sad and sweet. Goku and Chichi is the best couple ever no matter what. I believe Chichi has the strongest character in dbz. She's my favourite character. People don't see it because they are narrow minded and don't think of the sides of things. dbz is not a romance anime, it can't show everything single thing. It would take too long. I always wish there would a new edition of dbz which features everything that should have happened, and fill in all the gaps that had been skipped so much. You're a great writer. I don't like writing very much as my stories are too childish _. I don't have a sharp English to be able to write so I had wanted to give it up ever since I decided to leave for a year. I'm not writing anymore. I wish I could write like you but that's never gonna happen, my English is bad _. Please continue to write more Goku and Chichi fics. They are neglected too much. I love them and no matter what, I believe they will always be together. No any other couple in dbz could ever be able to replace them from my mind. Ever since I started to like them, I have no interest in any other animes or movies. They stole my heart away already _, lol, that sounds so weird huh? Anyway, hope to see more stories from you soon _, ja'ne