Just finished reading this story and I loved it so much so sad it ended

Oh im only halfway through but its like a car crash that i cant look away from... so much so that i make it home safely after witnessing the car crash then proceed to look up more pictures of crashes on the internet. Thats how much i cant look away from this disaster lol. The idea is preposterous but your writing is pretty great which is not usually the case with a weird premise. Crazy premise usually means crazy writing. Yours is pretty decent. There are some character inconsistencies to get this plot train moving but once its full steam ahead im on board! Choo choo! Great job so far hahah!

I'm so glad that the Slytherins are being portrayed in a good light. What a wonderful surprise.

It did seem to me as if he was willingly raping her; now that it is confirmed i wonder why the chapter b4 made it seem as if Snape was totally under the control of the imperius?

"Remembra"...seriously..lmfao

Oh my goodness! what an ending... I hope Sev makes Lucius tap out like the little bitch he is!

I sure hpe Hermione cuts Lucius's bits and pieces off and force-feeds them to a goat!

Me Thinks Severus will be the exact opposite of my worthless father. We needn't even go into that.

I usually post reviews of finished stories at the end. This is still a great read.

Loved this story and would enjoy an epilogue

this story was great… I cried so much, and I just loved it. You're a great writer and I'm definitely planning on reading more of your stories.

if this story is complete, why don't you mark its status as complete?

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I think my brain is melting after reading this. what an absolutely ridiculous story.
we need a "nice try" section on here.

this ron has nothing to do with harry potter ron. are you kidding me? furthermore, a man asserting his views on abortion is even more offensive than when random people do it. if someone wants to get one everyone else should get lost and shut up.

first off, I want to put your Rons face through a wall, second, the casual way Hermione just seems to continue passing Sebastian off is irritating and unhealthy.
Severus is far passed being OOC, and this plot seems to operate in an AU category.