I read this story about a year after you finished and added it to my favorites. I've recently gone back to reading the fics on my fav list, starting with the oldest. I think this one is something like 10th oldest? Anyways, I wanted to let you know I've thought of this fic often in the past 15 odd years. It's so funny, and as good as I remember.

Haha, awesome fic. Loved every minute of it. Keep up the lovely work!

Uh... wow... This was.. odd and hilarious! Loved reading it!

I will start with telling you that I do really like your story. It's a great change from all the yaoi or shonen-ai parings of the two that I am used to trudging through. It is hard to find original and cute stories like this. I praise your creativity and skills in weaving a humorous tale. I found myself actually laughing out loud at some parts, and going "awww" at times.

Now comes the critique. I simply adored the first twelve chapters of the story. Kurama and Hiei were OOC, but because it was a humorous story, that was easily forgiveable (it also helped that this was set, pre-series). However the last five chapters I found, a bit hard to read through and found myself loosing interest because the characters were so OOC.

Over all I loved your story.

giggles evilly

Hmm. Innocent? Based on his swaddled face in that flashback, he was never innocent, at least not in a sweet way. Peter Pan innocent and heartless, perhaps. He /grew/ a personality. The bandits weren't the best caretakers, but they didn't create the psychopath. He was born that, and confirmed in it by the exile, and earned his non-sociopath traits through loneliness, contemplation, and being illogically trusted. Not sold on this Kurama either.

Cute, though. Kurama finding him was funny, and I guess that's what this fic runs on.

hahah! so cute and umm funny.. really...hahha

This story was amazing, i loved it! Mama, hiei is so cute

I love this story! This is the second time I have read this, the first time I left it without doing anything for me to remeber what it was called or who it was by, and I got really mad at myself! I found it though! Sequal please!

This is funny. really it is. keep up the good work. i know reading your ideas are so much more fun than writing them. That and if you make it a contest then its more fun i think but that's just me. well anyway i really liked the story.

-amused snort- That was good. I was laughing, smiling and 'aww'ing quite a bit. Will/Is there a sequel? If so, whats it called? I'd REALLY like to read it, oh the humor! Keep writing!

I like it. ) Sequel please?

No story has ever made me smile, laugh and go 'aww' as much as this one has!

Amazing!

This story was absolutely adorable, but I shall not 'squeal', if you don't mind. ' You had plenty of humor, saddness, and cuteness in there that it made all nice and even. Absolutely loved it, Sagi-chan!

hahahahaha, i finally, after months of meaning to, have finished reading this story. You definitely should do a sequel. seriously. This story was extremely cute. great job! I adore your story-making skills! *bows down and whorships*