Truthfully the best read I've had in a long time. The story it-self is good but not the defining part of this story, ts the character development. I wouldn't be surprised if the author wrote this as a way to progress their character development writing skills further as I clearly see steady writing improvement when it comes to the characters.

really good read, absolutely recommend this through you'll need to find time to read it since the bulk is in the first three chapters. and chapter 4 has something around 5,000 to 9,000 words.

29c

Excellent story.

Wow awesome ! Just a great read

*whistles* this story was pretty solid. As a whole, I mean. There was plenty of dumb shit, if you take it individually. Hell, most of the story is built on things that look completely stupid on their own. Yet, somehow, you've kept it together and made it quite good. Except for the lightsaber thing, that was just stupid and a waste. The soul thing was great, but the lightsaber and back story felt like it would have been better off alone. Maybe some sort of remnant planetary system roughly survived, but is under threat, and he has to basically serve as both the planets diplomat and troubleshooter? I don't know, I expected actual spaceship type sci-fi when that showed up, and was disappointed a bit when I quickly realized that it wasn't going that way.

Just wow! This was very good. My only compliant was that this story's formatting was a little lacking. It really needed defined scene breaks. That would've made it easier to read.

REally good stuff!

Loved this story! Xander was particularly brilliantly written - though I adored the inclusion of James Bond too. Loved everything from the way they met, to the gift of the Aston Martin, to Bond showing up at the wedding, impeccably dressed and pressed, but stuffing a parachute under the pew. I do wonder just how he managed that. :)

Thanks for writing and posting! Loved it!

Damn this was a hell of a story. I didn't know too much about Noir, so I looked it up before starting this fic, and the two Maidens of Death def seemed interesting.

Once I actually began reading, I loved the way you blended Xander and the Noir together. Having them teach the young Scooby was a pleasure to read...I always enjoy stories where Xander gets a chance to truly shine. The return to Sunnydale and Krista was also a pleasant surprise.

Your writing was excellent throughout this story, and I wanted to thank you for writing this fic for the rest of us to read. Great job!

rereading this story after such a long time. Stil entertaining.

Incredibly good story are you going to write a sequel at any point?

Lovely, my friend. A very nice story all around.

Wow, this is a great story. It's length is belied by it's 4 chapters too, this is epic. Anyway, Thanks for the great read, and good luck on your endeavors. May the wind be at your back,

SoaP

Lovely chapter :) a great ending to a wonderfull story!

Reread the story, something I do very rarely. Enjoyed it again a whole lot.

Thank you very much or this magnificent story.