Reviews for So close
AvatarExperimentalMe chapter 17 . 6/7
Loved your pairing!
Mark Sinfield chapter 17 . 11/28/2018
another good story
Erimenthe chapter 17 . 10/9/2018
OMG this was a brilliant story and the end was so sad but happy at the same time. I do wish they'd been able to find some way but I guess not every story can have the perfect happy ending.
Guest chapter 4 . 1/18/2018
The story is okay but moving too slow for me
Guest chapter 3 . 1/18/2018
I dislike how emo and emotionally sensitive Harry is so far (even though he is in canon) but you seem to make him think about /wrists at every turn, other than that, every other character you've portrayed is really well done and I enjoy your style of writing.
Jimbocous chapter 17 . 4/22/2016
Wow. Nicely done!
Guest chapter 13 . 9/7/2012
You missed a lot of words. The story is good so far.
dumdoc chapter 17 . 3/26/2012
An excellent story. Thank plot, great writing, a sure sign of maturity.
Tmbookworm chapter 13 . 7/28/2011
He he! Just saying, this kinda IS what happened in the seventh book!
Needlessly Complicated chapter 1 . 3/1/2011
I actually cried at the end
Needlessly Complicated chapter 17 . 3/1/2011
Wow it's good but just soo sad
123-321 chapter 17 . 12/23/2009
very well done
WhiteElfElder chapter 17 . 10/22/2009
Good story. I bet Ginny was kicking herself three-ways-to-Sunday for what could have been her part. At least nobody will die from that knife ever again, but why didn't Harry leave the family invisibility cloak for his child?
elementalmage2008 chapter 17 . 6/22/2009
Another good one. i liked the ending a lot better, and the overall depression of Harry was kind of ncie because he reminded me as more of a "frodo" kind of character. The Character that never really heals from all of his horrific experiences... once i read about the hunt for the horcruxes, i secretly hoped that harry might not end up with that Fairytale ending i wanted for him when i first picked up the books. Or at least, i wanted him to not marry Ginny... oh well. Still, i wish you had answered the question about sirius, and the veil, and whether or not harry meets up with him, and his parents. I might be able to "make my own ending" but not knowing still leaves room for it to not come true, and it just doesn't give that sense of finality that holds the waking curiosity at bay...

i suppose that all of those barely finished endings will gnaw at me forever, and i won't truely be rid of them though, because too many people are fond of them...

still enough about my depressing thoughts.

It was a wonderful read and i hope that you continue to write many successful stories.
TxA-GunFighter chapter 17 . 12/29/2008
Good chapter. Good story and good writing. Just not my favorite type of story. I like happy Harry stories more.

gunny
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