| Reviews for Black Heart |
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   Pizzachic chapter 1 . 5/12/2013 This was so realistic and dark. I can really feel Blackfire having these emotions and insecurities. Nice! |
| cookies chapter 1 . 1/26/2005 Very nicely written, I stumbled upon your fic when I got tired of those pathetic child like writing styles of the authors who now dominate this category. Nice insight from Blackfire's point of view. I do hope you continue writing. |
| Dakyu chapter 1 . 1/17/2005 Hm. Of the fics that i've read from the villian's perspective, this is by far the best one i've read. I don't realy understand why people never think of the villians more: they're still PEOPLE, just a little misguided, or, in blackfire's case, unfortunate in the traits that she inherited from her parents. This is nice, keep up your writing, you're a really good author. Dakyu |
| xixblackfirexix chapter 1 . 9/17/2004 AWESOME! you capture every emotion Blackfire feels! It's just great! Write more! -Blackfire- |
| Fantazy chapter 1 . 8/14/2004 Awesome! You capture the guilt and fury as easily and well as a mitt catches a baseball. I hope you write more in the future! |
| RavenStar001 chapter 1 . 4/27/2004 Write more! |
| Overseer47 chapter 1 . 2/12/2004 ug, 2 lazy 2 login. Anyway, this is...wow...good... A BF reflection fic... I always kinda liked Blackfire better than Starfire. Although I always saw her as more misunderstood than outright evil. She just semmed too flat-charactered in the cartoon. You gave her a personality... I'm babbling, aren't ? I'l shut up now... |
| honkycabbit chapter 1 . 11/5/2003 Sad Oh So Sad! Man that's a sad situation. (Blows nose on one Hundred tissues) Please let Blackfire come out to play! |
| Momentum chapter 1 . 10/26/2003 Awesome. Superb. I know this sounds weird, but my fave character is Blackfire, and this was just cool. _ Good job! |
| ukyoluvr chapter 1 . 10/19/2003 A little incoherent at times, but very nice in general. It's a good idea and the writing holds one's attention from word to word. I can't wait for more fics from you! _~ -ucchan |
| GriffinFox chapter 1 . 10/12/2003 ...Wow! I never thought I'd feel sorry for Blackfire. Now I know I can kinda relate to her...great job! very nicely written! I "heart" you! You rock! |
| Miles Edgeworth chapter 1 . 9/24/2003 ... I read this and I forgot to review it. Dammit. Your characterization is spot on. Sibling rivalry and the jealousy between those two are key to recall. Yep. I think using Blackfire as a villain could be fun. Maybe when I actually write a story featuring action and multiple conflicts, I'll use her to the full potential you've seen to here. Ta! |
| Vulpixi Misa chapter 1 . 9/14/2003 Woah...that was kinda sad... I don't know how else to explain it. |
| Brie chapter 1 . 9/10/2003 GREAT! Will there be more? |
