aw!

I smiled through that whole story! its nice to see those two can do something with out Jack! ahahaha

I liked this story. It made me laugh...not in a making fun way though. It was funny. Hahahaha! Those Lost Boys always used to make me laugh. I'm going to go watch Peter Pan now. Heehee! Great story!

Heh. :) Happy. It's a shame you didn't manage to include Captain Sparrow, but it's a very cute fic. ;)

Wow, dude that is such a cool story, I love it!

oh my gosh that was so cute! This one was really just a joy to read. You know how most fics stick Jack in them, but this one didn't need Jack to be awesome.

"Let's get this raid over with. We don't want to keep the boys out past their bedtime.”

hahahahahaha! I'm seeing elizabeth saying that.

I really enjoyed this story. It was really good! Peter Pan, Tinkerbell, and the other Lost Boys were portrayed very well! It's a shame we couldn't have had more of Hook and his crew, they always made me laugh. You wrapped up the story rather well too!

Toodles grew up! He's gonna be Will's apprentice! But it's kinda funny, when I first read that Toodles was missing...the first thing that popped into my head was that he must have gone looking for his marbles *falls into giggles* Have you seen 'Hook'? If you haven't I guess that wouldn't make sense...but yeah; aside from my laspe of sanity, it was a really neat tie-in and I'm cool that Will caught on.

GREAT JOB!

WELL DONE

Aw...I like that ending! Although I wish Jack had been in it...:-/

Ohh...mermaids! Are the mermaids working with Hook?

Wait! They're in Never never land...how are they growing up? I'm very curious...

Hahahhaa...Elizabeth definitely picked up some fighting skills from Barbossa's little escapade, didn't she?

Very good! But what happens when Peter finds out that Will is a pirate? And will there be Jack in this? ;)

Cute ending to a cute story! _ Yay! And Will's just pushing that three-hour-a-day sword practice, isn't he? lol, don'tcha love 'im?

And I love the characters' personalities. You got Will and Lizzie perfectly, they're both totally adorable. Probably the coolest couple in movie history, indeed they are! _

This is funny, entertaining, weird, and has my favorite character, Will in it. Great job! I'll be putting this on favorites! You know how some writers DON'T keep the characters in character? The characters end up being dirty-minded? You are NOTHING like that. Thanks for not doing anything dirty to the characters that I love the most! Great job! Keep up the good work!

Will_gurl