Incomplete... weeping for myself. I must remember to check but I got distracted cause I love a marriage law fic. Oh well... off to find another xx

Great story. Super chapter. Loved your writing at the end. It was witty and engaging! Haven’t checked to see how old this story is but I’m glad to have stumbled across it!

I want to thank you first for your Marriage Law challenge. Such fun stories! And your story here in particular had such a unique starting point (I rather like Snape’s alternative family.). 15 years isn’t too long to stop from picking up the story again, right?

So CUTE!

Hahahah Love Severus Snape He is SO WICKED AWSOME!

Great story. Sorry you didn't do more with it.

Quite intriguing and well written. I imagine these many years later that you aren't likely to continue writing this, but I still wanted to appreciate your beginning efforts.

Whaaaaa? Where is the rest of this amazing story?

I hope this story gets finished, it's really interesting!

Hi - ignore my request on my prior review. i just saw that you had continued this story in Snape's POV. I have just begun reading that story. Thanks for writing

Hi, I just found your stories. I like this take on the marriage law. I hope at sometime you get the urge to finish it. It would be interesting to see how Severus' relationship with Hermione and his sisters develops.

I really hope that you will continue with this story.

it's a pity you haven't finished it

Well written...please feel free to come back and finish it. My fav character is definitely Trinity...I could see her sucking her thumb and giving 1000 watt smiles:)

Only two areas that bug me...one is the insistence that virginity is something to be rid of rather than something sacred and powerful. I don't want my man spliced in the soul...strength is found in chastity. The second is the minimization of motherhood as being strapped to diapers and naps...quite the opposite...being a mother is the most noble vocation in existence. You are forming the human soul. Any moron can get a job or make money...but motherhood requires true sacrifice, wisdom, strength, and nobility.

My fav part? Hmmm...watching Trinity hobble around after Snape...that image was priceless. And I could see the beginnings of Snape caring for Hermione...esp mentioning her being attractive and intelligent. So again...please feel free to pick up the story line. You have been blessed with a gift from God...thank you for sharing it with us:)

LOVE where this is going, but, WHY NO UPDATE IN FOREVER! Nuh!