No No NOOO She doesn't just love him, she got attacked and almost kileld partly because of him, and there is not infatuation you just can break. She shoulve just loved rosier, that is unrealistic. But aside from the sudden change I LOVED THIS FIC it was incredible.

Wow... AMAZING!
Truly loved this story
It was sad and sweet, and I really like how they complete and help each other
Their confrontation at the wedding was so sad and heartbreaking - poor Narcissa...
But I really LOVED this story!

Awww cute ending!

Il'Diko: Thank you very much for your wonderful, insightful (and totally flattering ;-)) reviews!

My hertah broke for Evan. :( Poor boy.

It was an interesting thought though, makign him join beacuse of despair... I like the idea, that not all purebloods wanted to join voldemorts regime and that they did it for reasons not quite similar to his.

Finnaly a reunion, they just belong. You made a very real Cissa and Lucius, I even managed to close them in my hertah.

As for Voldykinns... spot on, really, you did a nice job there!

And now, all that's left is to explore your profile... I'm dying to read more!

I'm in awe. You did it brilliantly.

This chap reminded me so much of Jane Austins work, I loved every peace of it. I loved how very aristocratic and old fashioned everything was, the love declaration from Evan, Bella as a bride, the setting, their thought and feelings. It was very beautifully written, I could see everything so clearly!

The paradox that is Bella amazes me. Lucius expressed my thoughts exactly! They would burn out first! I wonder how is she going to get completly nutters...

Amazing chap, really!

You really fleshed out Cissy and I must say, I rather like her. I wouldn't call her evil, she is a human like Snape said and humans do consider things like she did (like what it would be if she joined the death eaters... it's another thing, that later in her life, she will regret it... but young people just want power, they do not think!).

Interesting how you see Snape, you manage to make him very believable, I like to see his flaws and normal side too. I'm surprised to see little of his feelings for Evans (but that woiuld be his and not Cissy' story!).

Amazing, that your first language isn't english! You rock, and pull this of brilliantly!

Oh, brilliant story so far!

Very interesting plot and idea. It's unique the way you write the girls, them being orphans and all!

I love how different they are, yet, in a way how similar they seem to an outsider. I love how strong you make Cissy, and that this is all in her POV, she gets very little spot light in fanon, everyone writes about Bella and Meda. I was a bit surprised that you made Meda so shy and weak, I wonder where will she get her strength! Bella is, well, Bella, you nailed her and I rather like this pre-madness Bellatrix. I hope you will explore the bond the girls have a little more ( I liked how at the beginning they depended on themselves!).

And wow. I have NEVER seen such a realistic and interesting characterization of their aunt ( great names btw... they could be canon!;). She was a bit mad, yes, but you explore her normal, human side too... I loved that we got insight in her world and thoughts! A very well done Sirius too, Cissy comparison was spot on, there were two different Siriuses! And I liked Regulus too, it easy to imagine him weak and weak willed, and eventually "ready" to join the death eaters to please his family!

The overall style and mood was very well done, you captured the world of the pure blooded aristocrats very well. I love your prose, the words flow and the story is easy to read, despite the little grave tone (which suits perfectly!).

Will read on and also I'm favoriting this and putting on alert!

Thanks for sharing!

Diko :)

Abrupt ending but very nice story...

I found this story to be tinged with just the right amount of bittersweetness that is so characteristic of the LuciusNarcissa ship. A beautifully crafted fic that is absolutely wonderful to read. :D

Sweetie, I can't believe it is the end. I mean, it's obviously the end, but this has been the only HP fanfiction I've been reading so far and I'll miss it so much.

You wrote an amazing story, but I have to be totally sincere here, ok? Were you a little tired of the story at the end? Because you developed all the story brilliantly till the last chapter and then you suddenly finished. I mean, in no other chapter you were so direct, so sudden so right to the point as in this last one. I confess I'm with the feeling that something is lacking.

I'm not complaining, you wrote one of my favorite HP stories and for sure my favorite Narcissa story (and I ask sorry for taking so long to read the end, but I also was a little troubled with my life), I just feel that I could have more...

But I'm happy you came to an end. Can't wait to read other things from you. Hugs.

It was a great story. I really liked it. A few grammar mistakes but I dont really care! Keep up the wonderful writing!

Thank you so much for finishing the story. It was great to get some closure on the characters, although I have to admit I felt like the ending was a little abrupt... I had hoped that Voldemort's character would go somewhere and that Lucius' realization of the nature of his own feelings might be slightly more dramatic and conclusive but I suppose it's somewhat fitting that their relationship is left subtle.

i love this story, i cant wait to read the rest of it!

Please update and put us all out of our misery!