I can't be bothered to read this. The excessive amount of authors notes really puts me off.

The authors notes is now nothing more than padding for the word count.

Perhaps it's time to remove the author's notes (thank yous) from 2008? I can't imagine any reason why they should remain after so many YEARS!

yes this is the chapter where you lost the plot. went around the bend, the one where i am finished. i understand why the story is abandoned now

das ist eine der spannensten AU Storys die ich je gelesen habe, mit etwas viel verwirrung und einigen dramas :), ich liebe es. lg hainbuche

This is an exceptionally well written story and I really one day you might be able to complete as it's very different from all the other fanfictions

Personally, if i was put into Azkaban for ten years for a crime that I didn't commit then I would have rather left the country.

Now that he knows that is parents and Sirius are in Azkaban, why the hell is he not spending every waking moment making a plan to free them. Am I the only one who is surprised by his lack of care for his parents.

How the fuck has Harry not known about his parents till now. God this story just keeps getting worse and worse.
I really should not have pick it up.

Where the hell is this story even going anymore.

He knew that Snape could read his mind and still chose to stare at his eyes. Is he stupid or merely incompetent. Anyone with a shred of common sense would not make this mistake.
You are usually a good writer but this scene came off as really forced.

Drying charms are a thing a 6th year would be expected to know

Having dumbles and snape somehow suspect something already is ridiculous

awwww draco's so cuteeee

So much awesomeness...and it's obvious you know where the story is going...and nothing! Please at least give summary highlights of what was going to happen.