omg omg omg!

Update soon please! _

this is good

Awesomw! Keep on going! }]

That was entirely suspencing...please write more, you're very good.(smile)

This So rules!

I'm just on the 3rd ch. and I already love it!

Keep Writing!lol

Great job with the story! Now, all you have to do is write the next chapter . Please, please update this! Or else, i'm going to torture you continously until you do! Bwahahahaha! ...just kidding . I can't torture people, i'm too nice too ;;. Anyway, please, please, please update ! I just love this excitement!

x Silver-chan X

UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!C'MON UPDATE DAMN YOU!*clears thorat*I'm sorry. It's cause i really like this fic. Your fic is #4 on my top 30 fav. fics(10 of which are touya/jin)

I did not read this story you know why...it's because YOU PUT JIN AND TOUYA TOGETHER THAT IS SO WRONG!
I have a group of friends 4 to be exact and one likes Kurama, another Hiei, another Touya, and me Jin. We all agreed that these four are not paired in any way. This is a American childs cartoon and is not related in a lesbian or gay way so please do not wright stuff like this I personaly hate it sorry

No loophole. That is all I have to say. I am only 12 and I do not want to understand. Otherwise, pretty good. But I thought Hiei liked Yara and Kurama liked Nikki? Whateva.

omg this story is so cool! i love it! poor hiei though well keep going its really good

inu65: so, let me get this straight, ha! straight, non-gay! anyway, jin and touya are gay? but, but, but, bu-

hiei: OH THE HELL WITH IT!

jin: what was that about?

inu65: jin, let me introduce you to the best game ever...no, it's not unreal tournament, but close, BATTLE TANKS GLOBAL ASSALT! it's really fun! it's for N64 and u drive a tank around and kill the enemy's tanks and save the world! well...yeah you do save the world in a way.

hiei: WHY WON'T YOU DIE?

touya: WHY WON'T I DIE? WHY WON'T YOU DIE, HIEI?

hiei: CAUSE I'M SUPPOST TA WIN! IT'S MIKE'S WINNING GRAY CONTROLLER! HE ALWAYS WINS!

jin: who's this mike person?

inu65: my dad. you guys playin the death match?

hiei/touya: yup...

inu65: there's the story one where you guys can be on a team.

hiei: so.

touya: we don't care. WAHOO! I WON! YES!

kurama: i'm confused...

inu65: well, i'll read more later. i have ta go work on Demon Tears and my other stories. see ya latta!

I LOVE JIN! he's funky irish accent makes me laugh!

jin: i thought u were crazy urameshi, but not that crazy! u don't let bombs go boom in ur face!

inu65: yeah. my favorite line! hey, 2 demons going shopping doesn't spell trouble! CTC and i go shopping all the time!

kurama: *sigh* u r in ur human form so nobody knows.

inu65: yo, Mrs. Minamono, what the he-heck do u have against gays? gays are fun people! and no, i'm not gay, i'm perfectly straight thank you very much.

jin: it was just a joke u know...do u?

inu65: if i was gay, then why would i think kenshin is hot? or sesshomaru? inuyasha's just cute, miroku's cute, and u kurama...don't get me started. hiei, ur just so cute! slash hot! *_* anyway, i must read more!

hey really good story!

No!I want more!