Wow, that was some amazing introspective writing, as if you were right in Face's head! Would love to read more A Team stories from you!

This is possibly one of the best TAT stories ever written.
The dialogue, the descriptions, the emotions, the characterizations...all spot on!
Absolutely dead center, spot on. You have a talent! Brava!

Loved your story, very instrospective, this last chapter was amazing. I really liked what Hannible asked Face, if he was atoning for something. You did a wonderful job with the characters, and I appreciated that, along with the story line, which was refreshing and different. Thanks!

Truly one of my favorite stories! I've read it over and over. Love your writing style and the back and forth. Excellent job!

I love this story!

Excellent story done well.

I really liked the way you told this story. You got me interested in the beginning with Face hurt on the couch and then told the story with flashbacks on how he got that way. Well done!

Excellent. Really enjoyed this.

Great story. You're a very talented writer.

Nicely done.

Nicely done. I like the way you decided to structure the story and I also like the way you didn't need to identify what happened in Face's past to cause his behaviour. Doing this changed the focus from events to that of the team interactions which I think you captured well. BA does have a soft side, Murdock does have a sane side and Hannibal defintely plays both the leader and the father figure. Keep up the good work.

Aw. That was...that was a perfect way to end it. You still kept the mystique of Face's past intact, but there was appropriate comfort for the story. Great job all around!

Face? What the? Oh God, please tell me this did not bring up things I really don't want to think about...ugh. *hugs Face* Again, great characterization. I particularly love how we get to see BA's soft side and how Murdock's pretty much sane when he's worried. Nice job. Hopefully Face will talk to Hannibal now?

Wow. Simply wow! Excellent chapter! I mean the characterization on this was beautiful! I could see every detail in my head perfectly! Love the interaction with Murdock, B.A., and Amy! You can tell just how worried all of them are, and just how each of them fits in the team. Great description of Face's interactions with Amy too. Just all around awesome chapter!

Well, Face, you are the master of bs. I think you can come up with something ;). Though, I still have no idea what the hell is going on with that boy and it's starting to get on my nerves...But he is right, if anyone can crack him it's Hannibal.