Confusing to read.

Can you use these " " when their speaking? I like the story so far but am confused, thank you for listening

This was an excellent story. I feel that Gohan would be wished back. You left room for a second story that I really wish you would write.

so is gohan is going to stay dead or is someone going to wish him back?

I choose option C

The way you ended the story made it sound like there will be more to this storyline. PLEASE don't leave Gohan dead! You should have him allow himself to be wished back and confront Raditz! I'd LOVE to see that!

If Piccolo was defeated by the Androids, the dragonballs are useless and Kami is gone!

Has Gohan's ki changed so much that it's unrecognizable?

Where does Gohan live?

I liked the actual content of what little I read, but seriously bro, there are these things called quotation marks; they exist so that people can tell the difference between narration and dialogue. If you ever get around to adding them in PM me and I'll read the whole thing, as I said, I liked what I did read, but until then it just gives me to much of a headache to look at.

Excuse me, could I get the link where I can full read the whole version?

The link is not working?

Straight up best fanfic ive ever read... did made me stay up an extra 1 1/2 hrs

Cool this is really one of my favorites stories ever made me cry and laugh will this be continued? And if so can't wait keep on writing :)

Link is dead too bad

I know this story is kinda old, but I LOVE it. I REALLY, REALLY love it.

DON'T be afraid of writing about smut. I can't stand sex in real life, but I will stop at nothing to write erotic fanfiction between two fictional characters.

Oh, and I know I'm not the only one who has said this, but fanlib is down. Could you post the smutty!chapters somewhere else? Pwease?