Lovely. I was concerned for your other one shot so I am happy to see that he certainly got his happy ending here!

Very sweet! Adds more of what has always been missing from the ending. :)

I loved all three of your Ella Enchanted stories. You captured them so beautifully, I could sing!

I know you published this a long time ago, but I just read the two stories in a row and I'm weeping right now. I didn't even cry when I read the scene in the book, I was just super nervous then joyful. But you're writing from Char's POV had me in tears. That was amazing. Well done :)

I always wondered what happened to Char after Ella left the ball. I suppose I know now. Great story!

Wonderful! I loved it from Char's point of view!
Great job!

poser16

Beautifully rendered scene from Char's perspective. Keep writing! :-D

This was seriously awesome.

Aw! Wow, that was soo good! Do you know anyone who's written the whole book in Char's pov?

Exquisite.

You're fabulous at writing love. I've never been able to see Char like this, but it seems just right.

I LOVED seeing his pov! It was perfect, his thoughts in line with actions as seen in the book, his anger, sadness, bewilderment, and joy written out with his style of speech well preserved. Love it, absolutely, it was a wonderful little fic (with its matching prequel) that ended happily, as all my fave stories do.

Sigh. Wonderful writing!

THat was wonderful!

Perfect. Loved it. Really sweet and fluffy compared to the previous one xD Nice contrast.

Kate