Selfish bitch Buffy. If I was Joyce I wouldn't want anything to do with her anymore.

I know that if I was Dawn.. I'd want Giles away from me.. maybe I'd even kill him.

This was really good! Please make a sequal - it would be pretty cool. You could make it so Spike remembered their dream. Ha ha.

I love this story! Fabulous! Great job! Minimal editing mistakes which is great!

hey this is really cool!

i love your fics with Dawn in them, could you do a AU spin off from this one where Dawn was Vamped, and Angel(us) still ended up in that hell world, so Dawn is left with Dru and Spike?

I guess that at then end Buffy saves Dawn as well. It's good.

SEQUEL! PLEASE!

I just discovered this story, and it was absolutely wonderful. I am a huge Dawn fan, and I always thought about what earlier episodes would be have been like with her in it. You did a wonderful job. I felt like I was simply watching a revised edition of one of my favorite episodes. I am actually teary as I write this. Awesome job. Now I have to go read more of your stories!

I know that it's rated R for a reason and all but it was still rather disturbing and gross...O_o...I mean I was expecting swearing and maybe some implied torture...not a big gore/torture/kill fest. o_o;

I don't know. Just too, way too dark to be enjoyable is what I'm saying.

Wow,this is a really great story. I love how it ended.

I loved the sand castle bit; and this whole entire thing lol. The whole concept is great! I cant wait for more

-P.d.

So far, awesome. Your portrayal of Angelus and Drusilla is excellent! Very in character.

Good ending, but dang you Starling! You didn't leave any hints about a sequel! Oh well I guess, If you don't make one then I guess I can imagine one, I'd just rather you save me the trouble and write one though. Anyway, bye.

More Dawnverse please!

IF you do requests, can you throw a little bit of Kendra/Xander in too?

*She hesitated before she stepped forward and embraced him. He looked at her, confused for a moment before wrapping his arms around her. They remained in each other's arms, comforting each other. They knew they wouldn't see each other anytime soon. Suddenly, Spike looked up.*

I love that part. And great epilogue!. I hope that you will write a sequel, your fics are really wonderful!