Aw. This is so much more realistic then the ones where he proclaims his undying love; he's twelve, people, and he's RON. Yet being Ron also means he's INCREDIBLY SWEET AND ADORABLE AND *goes on for another several hours*

Nice! I love the way you draw everything (and everyone) into the final lines of your story. You do that on most of your stories and it's very intriguing. We wait...and we wait...and we watch...and we read...and then finally you give it to us (POW!) in a single sentence. Well done!

*tears flow* argh!

aw...thats so cute!

*blinkblink* aww! so cute. this made me smile!

Again, like "dissapointment", too short.

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We could use a good shorts writer like you.

Oh, wow. I love this one, too. Curse your writing abilities! Able to put so much emotion into one small fic! It's amazing.

Nice work.

really sweet...I like it :D

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This is cute. Write more, k? And longer... I like Ron/Hermione stories.

that was so adorably cute and fluffy and great, and i'm in a way happy mood now! ooh, and i liked it loads, cos i reckon that was the actual point in time Ron realized, so it works well in my wierd li'l mind. i wish it had been longer though...

You're right. Short and sweet. I liked it.

Unsatisfyingly short but the bits that are there are wonderful. I thought the last line was utterly appropriate and extremely in-character. It's very Ronnish! I just wish you wrote a little more :(

Hi!

Aww, this was so sweet!

I personally think that was when Ron realized, you know.

Anyway, I love it.

Keep writing and I'll review.

Caty

(ps-If it isn't too much to ask, do you think you could read my story, "Rain", if you get the chance? Thanks!)

AAW! That is so sweet!

Aww,very very well done.

xoxo,

sara

It was so sweet! I really liked it!