How did Raoul know? I'm starting to suspect he's a stalker... Hahaha.

wow, i didnt think it was possible, But...

~you managed to take a good plot line and murder it

~destroy the books horribly at your leisure further showing your total lack of understanding of the books

~write horribly

~make this entirely unengaging

~and stupid

~while showing your complete pathetic lack of ability to comprehend, compose, or be in the slightest bit considerate to your readers.

all in all:

THIS STORY SUCKED.

wow, my first total flame! hope you enjoyed reading what i wrote! because i really didnt enjoy reading what YOU wrote!

i really liked it

WOAH! way to dump an idea on an unprepared viewer! sheesh. shock of my life right there lol.

I loved the last line. Is Fhire pronounce fire?

I can help with this one! Although you've probably already figured it out. You use magic, like a 'muscle melt' spell, or something similar. Have her fight the spell and all, but she can't throw it off. Instead of having her traumatized and mopey, have her angry and whoop Cleon's ass!

love this! u so got 2 make a sequel!

awesome story i love it ty for writing i'm going to read the sequel

have u ever played paintball? i want to and my brother offered to take me once but i didn't and now i have a chance to play at camp and i even offered to pay for and now my father says i can't

seroisly he treats me like i'm f*cking 2!

when i'll be turning 1* in october (cant tell you my real age now can i it's over 10 under 16)

ah omg i'm so pissed at him

excuse the rant i'm a little pissed and slightly disturbed because i found out today that one of the other girls in my year(i refrain from calling her a classmate because i hate her) called one of my friends and asked her to email me and say and i quote "that (insert girls name hear) wishes to be your sex slave" i was greatly disturbed and plan on avoiding her for the next 4-and-a-half days until school ends

the same girl who was asked to e-mail me has been stalked by her ex who i've hated since i met him(or pretty much) he keeps calling her and asking her out again (they broke up for a week and then got together again like twice)i almost told her Oh My God it's like a sopophra with ugly people (i got that off of tv and it fits except for my friend)

now that you've listened to my rant long enough i must go read and continue to ignore my father who is trying to get my attention by shouting my name over and over

this is the longest review i've ever writen do enjoy(although most of it had no relivence to the story what-so-ever) i love this story thank you for writing

31 CHAPTERS! 31 CHAPTERS! i swear my eyes are about to fall out! :D

twas worth it though...all the ups and downs, trials and tribulations of a normal relationship; this was a very realistic KD fic, which i LOVED! i loved fhire, and the battles and the fights (although they did upset me...*sniffle*) and the 'i love yous' etc etc etc. the writing quality has been consistently brilliant throughout and BLIMEY! did you fit alot into 30-odd chapters. be proud! well done, and thanks for writing this. :) :) :)

i like it alot. there are some serious tipe-os however

ttfn

great story

I LOVED THIS! :]

I FINISHED IT! IT ROXS!

I LOVE THIS STORY IT IS REALLY GOD

AMAZING! but i looked at your eviews and they said you killed jump? WHY THE BLOODY HELL WOULD YOU DO A TERRIBLE THING LIKE THAT!

loved it (and all ur other stories too)!