WOW. I am so going to memorize this. And quote it for Halloween...

Wolfsbane is all about the alpha, Calla and Monroe wants her too help him give all of them freedom.

O_O wow...this is like something i would write :D i love it muches! this is a fav for sure :D

Bravo! You were right to share - this is the perfect potion for ole Snape to create for the "Lone Wolf." ;-)

Jolly good - "...Toss the sulfur, add the bone..."

Ah, yes, my dear...all in a day's work...all in a day's work... :-D

Cool. No wonder it tastes bad! Great rhyme and rhythm.

A bit creepy, but...it fits. I really can't phrase it any better than that.
Anyway, maybe it was just me, but the rhythm seemed a bit off in line 8 ('And have this elixir combine'), but that could have been just me...I'm really not much of a poet.
Other than that, I loved it!

This was a great poem! My first reaction to it when I finished was "cool". It makes wolfsbane seem evil. . .yet the end shows that it's not really. . . It's like a cursed potion. Your really talented! Keep on writing!

great chant. feels free, rhyme that isn't all twisted and forced out, but just flows or rises like steam.

Werecat! Haven't heard from you in a while. Thanks so much for the review! And I love this poem. It's darkly lyrical, and you've obviously put a lot of thought into what ingredients to put into a wolfsbane potion. I love it!

*shiver* A beautiful and haunting piece of work!

Good poem, scans well, rhymes naturally - and I love the subject matter.
(Maglor, also known as Finch.)

So much imparted in so few words - the making of the potion, the power of the potion and of course the drinker of the potion. I'm speechless.

that's good ... very good.

wow, that realy googd work!
You're a born poet

It may have been written on its own, but it does fit Lupin. Well done (especially as I am very bad at rhyming things).