Please update this story soon

Will this story be updated or is it discontinued?

"Remus said that this would be more appropriate for tonight then my dress robes." - "Remus said that this would be more appropriate for tonight THAN my dress robes."

Placed in front of him was a file filled with paperwork and something Hermione had only seen once before in her life – a Pensive. I wonder if Sirius recorded his will in a Pensive…Oh Gods. How will Harry react to that? She glanced at Harry and found him staring at the Pensive with a frown on his face." - "Placed in front of him was a file filled with paperwork and something Hermione had only seen once before in her life – a Pensieve. I wonder if Sirius recorded his will in a Pensieve…Oh Gods. How will Harry react to that? She glanced at Harry and found him staring at the Pensieve with a frown on his face."

"He paused to lean forward and press a switch on the Pensive," - "He paused to lean forward and press a switch on the Pensieve,".

"(Yes I know my dear Nymphadora that you despise that name but I figure I can get away with it now seeing as that I am dead)" - "(Yes I know my dear Nymphadora that you despise that name but I figure I can get away with it now seeing as I am dead)".

"if it comes to the knowledge of Mr. Tasker that Lucius in anyway gets his filthy-Death Eater hands on it," - "Lucius in any way gets".

"Sirius stopped speaking and began to pace around the table, "To Severus Snape – I offer my apologies for a childhood filled with torment and embarrassment, in the end I hope we both find peace Severus – I also leave to Severus the immense Black Family potions laboratory which resides in the basement – I think you will enjoy that Severus, despite our differences, you were the greatest potions master I have ever known." Out of the corner of her eye, Hermione noticed that the Professor appeared to be touched by this statement as he was no longer sneering." - Those are two surprises, both the bequest and Severus Snape's reaction to it.

"Ron spoke up, "Are we rich? How much did he leave us exactly?" Ron Bilius Weasley, you are a mercenary git!

"Boy's show some respect!" - "Boys show some respect!"

Yay! at Harry's rant. AND I am glad that Ron's parents heard it too - that they now know what kind of git they raised.

"and the bags under your just scream eyeliner." - "and the bags under your eyes just scream eyeliner."?

"and that lavender brazier just isn't your color," - "and that lavender brassiere just isn't your color,". A "brazier" is a container for hot coals.

"Hermione jumped back in surprise as Ginny ran past her in the hallway, the young girl's giggling echoing off the dark walls. She was quickly followed by her older brother Ron, who Hermione noticed as he darted past her, had large, green ears and bright yellow hair, which oddly enough, reminded Hermione of a Muggle troll doll. Try as she might Hermione could not hold back the loud, boisterous laughter that came from her at the sight. Ron stepped dead in his tracks and spun around. "Think this is funny do you? You know why she did this?" He asked breathlessly. Holding her hand over her mouth, Hermione shook her head silently. Ron raised an eyebrow, his expression changing from anger to doubt, "You don't? Funny – she said that you would know." Hermione made a face, "I swear I don't know Ron." The now yellow-haired wizard narrowed his eyes at her, "Sure, right" Before Hermione could argue with him Ron took off again after Ginny, who had now made her way to the second landing and was making snorting sounds and stomping stupidly around like a mountain troll. "You're dead, Ginny. Mark my words!" Ron shouted as he stomped down the stairs after her, his large ears flopping around wildly." - I wish Ron could stay that way permanently.

"I've run out of the Dreamless Drought potion you know?" -"Did Hermione mean to say: "Dreamless Draught you know"?

"without the Dreamless Drought" - "Dreamless Draught"? since "drought" is s sate where a place has no water and is dry or thirsty.

"wearing black jeans, a tight fitting red sleeveless t-shirt and black trainers." - Yum!

"he saw Pig, Hedwig and an unfamiliar black owl sat on the window pane, waiting for him patiently." - The three owls made a pretty mental pic.

"and a new revised edition of Quidditch: Through the Ages; which ironically had a chapter devoted entirely to himself. Shaking his head in amusement," - I thought he would be pissed off at that.

"Tonks (who actually enchanted the scroll to sing, "WOTCHER, HAPPY BIRTHDAY HARRY! for five minutes straight)," - AW!

"Dursely's" - "Dursleys".

hey are you going to continue this story?

it's looks too good to let it go

i hope you can update it soon! ]

Looking forward to reading more of this story soon.

I agree Hermione, I agree. Well done chapter.

You just need to choose and stop dithering. They are jealous of each other.

Superb beginning! Hey, harry, it is one date. No more.

This is truly an amazing story, but I must ask if you intend to finish it. Leaving it like that without so much as an author's note is down right cruel, as I simply adore this story. Please update? It is an excellent fic, really.

Cheers,

Madm_05

this is a good story and i like it very much.

I LOVE IT !

please continue

Hey this is f**king outstanding. I love the dialogue between Harry and Mione especially their thoughts interlaced with it and the orgasm was superb but I got one question where's the rest of the story!

Come on there's got to be more than this, this is to outstanding of a story not to be finished or at least alot further along than this.

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