Reviews for Mindless Snogging |
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Guest chapter 14 . 6/11/2018 Where is the rest of the story? |
El' Caliente chapter 14 . 3/7/2010 PLEASE PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY PLEASE! |
Ms.Reinvented chapter 14 . 12/9/2007 luv dis story! update soon! |
2manythingstolove chapter 14 . 11/4/2007 Well, this may be falling on deaf ears, but PLZ update! |
Mouchi-Mou chapter 14 . 7/14/2007 This story is amazing. keep on writing it :) Signed: Tainted Halo Lao Ma Tatsu |
Mouchi-Mou chapter 2 . 7/14/2007 Exellent story;) Keep on writing. Looking forward to any other fanfics you have written :) Signed: Tainted Halo Lao Ma Tatsu |
noodles chapter 14 . 2/13/2007 well..there so much to say so little space. anyway, it's an interesting story however, there's very little to no transition for the reader to figure out what just happened. you use a lot of "big words and complicated phrasing common to old style writings" which i find nice, however, you use them inconsistently and most often apply the style in a somewhat lacking manner. another thing would be spelling, use a spell checker. all in all, your story is very interesting and compelling but lacking in presentation and execution. |
KENRKNRERJERKENJRUUEJD chapter 14 . 10/14/2006 Update! Update! Want more fast. Love the story, you're a great writer. I want more now, please update soon. |
prongette chapter 11 . 9/20/2006 Holy Shizz ! I'm crying right now ! You have an amazing talent and story ! Your writings are awesome ! Keep up thee FANTABULOUS work, love ! m ! |
XxxbabigurlxxX chapter 14 . 8/26/2006 love ya story |
pau chapter 1 . 7/30/2006 . . .yoh cool person. . . . . .i don't know what to say. . . . . .hehehe. . . . . .joke. . . . . .i want you to know. . . . . .that i really like your mindless snogging. . . . . .please finish it. . . . . .i beg of you. . . . . .i'll wait for the continuation. . . . . .thanks. . . |
Trev2525 chapter 6 . 3/7/2006 This is a really interesting story. You tell it with such great detail and a magnificent usage of words. It really pulls you in! JOB! |
AmongDarkShadows chapter 4 . 2/28/2006 o! BURN! lol |
AmongDarkShadows chapter 3 . 2/28/2006 well, that sucks for draco. |
AmongDarkShadows chapter 2 . 2/28/2006 aw. thats so sad! |