Really beautiful this story. I enjoyed how you portrayed the characters' anti-fairytale and really pitied and admired Laguna and his resolve to help his son one last time...

I honestly cheered when they got back together so thanks for that!

Cheers

Keep Writing

hmm.. I think it makes sense that Squall would quit SeeD for himself.. he shoudl have done it long ago.. but if he had done it for anyone else, he would probably be bitter

I'm going to admit, the plot is nothing new, but it your writing style compensates for it. But, man. What's with the format? It's good and all but it's kinda getting confusing with the way you write it. But yeah...ish good. Well, I can't judge completely since I just finished chapter 2 o.O Anyways...AT LEAST it's complete

And everything turns out like it should in the end. I didn't mind the analogies. I love great fanfiction! Seriously, thanks for writing this.

Oh, the powerful lovers' reunion! Beautiful. I'm blushing. Hee hee.

Nice. Very nice.

Ah, I love this story. Good chapter. I'm a sucker for a little separation and longing in my love stories. This story is in my favorites. I love you.

This first chapter was not boring. Not at all. It was quite lovely, actually.I really liked it. Clever use of that Cowboy Bebop song, too. On to chapter two.

Wow...the fic was simply awesome, it finally showed the characters in the light of reality and not one that had always be fortunate enough to live in fairytale end. Your works are truly fantastic! )

So well written. Really it was beautiful. This is the first i've read of your storys. Loved it, keep it up.

This was... just beautiful.. excellent and just wonderful! I'm trying to think of appropriate words to describe this.. but I'm at a loss... this was so emotional and *chokes on words* Damn it, you really got me with this. I love this, simple as that. You just have a way with words and the way you described the angst and how they were feeling touched me, and I'm proud. You had better keep writing.

Wow. I'm not a great reviewer, so I'm just going to ramble. This was a very beautiful piece of art. Not writing, because writing seems too bland of a word, and you've painted this little ficlet into an extraordinary masterpiece. You seem like someone who has deep insight about emotions, feelings, and just being plain humane. All the small things you made the characters think or feel are so real, and the words you pick for description add so much more colour to this already wonderfully structured piece. I usually dislike seeing lyrics scattered throughout a story, but strangely, I loved the songs you chose and the lyrics only added and did not take, in which they usually do in all the other times I see songs being used in fics. My review is a little late, but I don't think I can forgive myself if I don't attempt to pour praise onto you because you deserve it.

Oh my... I don't know what to say.

This is just... wonderful! I don't care it's corny, or mushy, or whatever you think it is... it's beautiful. You're still my favorite writer. Please, please write more!

Thanks for this great piece of art.

Hiasha

Whoa.

I'm speechless...besides the fact I suck reviewing. This story was absolutely superb! Believe me, I never say that, ever! (meaning it is REALLY REALLY REALLY GOOD)

K, as you suggest, I'll go read your other one since it'll probably be great as this.

P.S. I like mushy stuff. It's so cute...m...

No worries, symbolism is always welcome! -

Once again you have a beautifully written chapter with a song that is perfectly integrated in it.

Now I gotta read Dreaming awake…so, see you soon!

Rinoica