loved this story

Ahh love it

cool

A beautiful and touching story, I really enjoyed all of the emotion you packed in, and the plot was good as well! I loved Cassius and Harry's relationship, and the relationship between Remus and Cassius, both relationships were full of love and caring. Thank you for writing and sharing this story! : )

I loved this story! It's been a long loooong time since a story actually made me tear up. The wedding was so perfect for Tabby and Moody

aww i was kindof hoping harry would get some one since he was asking about kissing and stuff

i wouldnt even mind if it was with draco and i dodt even like that couple much

anyways s love the story it was very touching and sweet and it made me very happy for harry

I've read this story a couple of times, and am not really sure why I haven't reviewed it before. It's a lovely, heartwarming fic!

Just brilliant, I love it every time I read it. :D

You did great for your first story. Not many people I know can write fanfiction there first time like this. It was great.

awesome story,good work

magnificent story ...

good job _

I LOVED LOVED LOVED your story! My favourite character was Cassius Malfoy, I wish he was real You write well, and have a good view over your plot (? Im not super in english phrases, sorry), but I agree with Lile Arresty. Chapter 24 was very confusing and superficial. You suddenly startet to write in present, when you up until then had written past. I also thought it was a dream, but I got dissapointed. It kind of feels like there is another person writing this chapter, bcause there is a big contrast with your earlier chapter. It was just weird...Anywas, great story, super plot, loved your characters! Keep writing :)

awesome story

That story was really amazing. I had a wonderful afternoon and evening reading it. Your characters were adorable and interesting. My favorite characters were the Lupin couple. They have a loving relationship and make a cute couple. I loved how Cassius cared for Remus after the full moon and is protective about his family and how Remus teases him about his bad memory. The lying exercises with Draco were hilarious. I think you described the family dynamic rather well. But, somehow this fic was too short. There could have been so many more scenes.

The only thing I disliked (and this is a very big dislike) is chapter 24. In fact, I hate it. What were you thinking? It’s badly written, in every sense of those words: disconnected sentences, silly ideas about the plot... I first thought it was a dream of Harry’s. When I realised it was for real, I skipped the whole chapter (after reading less than a fourth). I’m sorry. But in my opinion this whole chapter should be deleted.

Anyway, I loved this story, and I really hope you have a sequel on your author’s page. I will go looking now, just wanted to review and favorite this story first.

Write more about this amazing family! Please!

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OMG,

I so love Cassius *another fav chara found* it's a shame he wasnt in J.K.'s books!

Lu