...and just like that my enthusiasm fizzled out.
Suddenly I am faced with a chapter full of cliches and a fat too accepting Harry.
The whole 'we-had-to-test-you' thing...sorry.
The switch is too great.
Oh well.

That...that...oooooo *stomps foot*

*blinks* Escape rooms with assailants? Talk about one hell of a training exercise!

How in tarnation does that guy get into such situations? *smh* well, on to the next chapter...

Wow, powerful beginning.
I can't wait to read the rest.

Sorry but I don't like cock sucking fics so good bye!

Also I just noticed how old this fic is. Old as fuck! I wish stories would have dates on them BEFORE click on them.

'But Harry is inherently good so I couldn't have him kill the old man, Too bad I'm such a cock sucker if you ask me as I can't really think for myself without others influencing me'

There I edited your response to your true feelings for him.

An appropriate title would be Harry And the Road to Post Drug Addiction Recovery as he escapes his own mind thru these series of tests and we all find out it was Harry leaving the confines of a drug trip.

At least us Dumbledore haters don't cow into submission and are not afraid to question things and it is us Dumbledore haters that will be the freedom fighters for tomorrow.

Now if you don't mind I prefer to take the red pill of awareness have fun dreaming!

I only read this because even bad action fics can still be funny no matter how horrible it's written sometimes there's always a laugh.

Sorry but this story is a bit too Mary Sue or should I say Garu Stu the male version of it.

I like the fanfics that are not so biased towards Gryffindor and doesn't shoe horn other houses.

There I did my standard review on average fics.

Anybody who likes it either has no deduction skills or is kissing ass.

What the hell is this kind of fanfic? A crossover with something else?

Is this story about escaping the minds of a drug addict?

Eight years later, but excellent fiction never ages especially in cyber space. But this is still fresher than a lot of other works coming out today.

this is amazing!

Overall this is quite good. Equally important is that this is original. Your characterization of Blaise manages to make her appealing, while, not making her appear to be someone who should have been in Hufflepuf, as some stories do. Nicely done..

One thing that needs fixed this chapter is you go from their fight to them in a library, without any obvious transition.