Ugh...what a painful and shocking experience for poor Ranma and Shampoo. Akane, no matter what light she is viewed in, is a violent psycho who badly needs therapy.

I guess this story is dead, it looks like the account maybe dead since nothing has been posted after 2009.

Meep!

good story.

revive and update this please it's interesting and unique

Your use of bold and italics to emphasize certain blocks of words is very loud and annoying. It didn't even start out this way, but as the story progressed the quality deteriorated and at some point the story just didn't go anywhere and became a generic "poor Ranma" and "more fiancés" cliche without anything substance to the plot to make it more enjoyable.

Minako got over her rage and trauma over Ranma's bullying far to quickly, these things take much longer to resolve. Ami being related to the Tendos did nothing for the overall plot other than making her a fiancee, and honestly trying to make more than two of the Senshi fiancés really isn't such a great idea. I think I could've tolerated Rei and Makoto being engaged to Ranma, considering the setup, but in most cases if there has to be an engagement, it would be preferable to only have one.

The only exceptions are if the story is meant to be crack-ish, or if the story was geared towards the romance/comedy, which usually ends up being crack-ish anyways. Your story is set up to be neither, instead it started off seeming as if it was supposed to be romance/action, with slight hints of adventure and friendship building, but halfway through this concept just kinda fell appart.

That's about all I have to say, if you do read this, thank you for your time.

" But this means I can oill Ranma! YES!"

. . .

Really? That's your life goal? Really?

I loved it and I can't wait for chapter 16 & chapter 17 to be up I hope that thay are up really soon

Note that Rei does not complain about the engagement even once.

I don't expect the author to still be around, but I just have to say that all those words in cursive have become a bit annoying, and there seems to be no rhyme or reason for it, more or less random words.

splendid, magnificent story, ¿continue?

OK, this chapter is officially insane.

Please, PLEASE continue this! i wanna see the reactions of his now 5 Wives to the idea of being co-wife to a goddess!

I really like this story it's a pity it seems to be dead

[Ranma Crossing Over too the Wild Side] very nice fiction. any more fiction ? i like your style. make more comedy Ranma expense. i find it very VERY funny _