...OUCH.

What I wouldn't give for this to be turned into a doujin! This was absolutely awesome! :D

that was...amazing. Just flawless and darkly beautiful.

very intense, and sad. but i loved it.

I like this, a lot. When I started I didn't notice the first two lines of the story:

"How can you have a surface if there is nothing beneath it?

Where is the support?"

After reading it though, I realized that was what it was all about. You really explored what it would mean for the hikaris to lose their yamis. I'd ask what Yugi was looking for, and whether they all die, but the answers seem less important than the way you answered those two questions. This was very impressive.

Thank you. _

Wow. Not sure what I can add that hasn't already been said, but this was just so intense and well written and...creepy, is that the right word? The extremes of trying so hard to get closer, to get away, to escape. Just brilliant.

Oh my gosh... this was... so intense...I...

I can't even begin to say how amazing this story is. Chilling and angsty, it's just beautiful in a cold sort of way. I am speechless. Fantastic job. I applaud you whole-heartedly.

Amazing, and chilling. My favorite part's gotta be be "Bakura winked back at Ryou" - so slight, so innocent, and yet frightening at the same time... Thank you for writing this splendid piece of fanfiction.

Wow, this is really, just amazing. You did a wonderful job on this, seperating the characters and making each f their attept at coping unique. I really loved how the scenes ran parellel to each other and how you show the way each yami affected his hoest.

I love the way you write, and this story really was wonderful.

Excellent story full of angst.

I feel sorry for Yugi as he's trying to cope with Atem leaving him and he's not doing very well in his battle.

I guess the reason he's in the Soul Room is that he's probably searching for a way to find his ex-other half again.

I'm speechless. That was unbelievable. Well done.

wow... that was awesome... really sad, but awesome...

Wow. wonderful fic. It's probably obvious but please tell me this isn't a oneshot! i really hope you continue this fic!

Interesting. It's kind of sad how much sense it makes that the hikaris wouldn't last long after their yamis were gone.

This is so good I don't even know what to say about it. I'll just say that I've spent most of the afternoon reading your stories when I should be doing something else, because they're all so good I can't stop. This one may be my favorite... maybe because it feels something like I feel about the end of the manga, if you know what I mean.

Damn. I just hope I can write this well someday.