Heya!

Hahaha this was sooo funny! I loved it, :) keep up the good work my friend... And make sure you write another one:., but with only twice as much sugar as you ate writing this one lolol! XD

Ha ha ha ha good old sugar!

HOLY FAUK! LOL! LMFAO!1

lolololol, pretty good keep it up

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! IT IS EVIL! It's great! I love that you managed to not repeat themes. Poor Jack. Stuck in a never-ending loop of insanity. *grins evilly*

Ahh, nothing like sugar. _ Nice story.

That's hilarious I think, I can't remember I keep reading stories and I suffer from short term memory loss and um...uh bye...i think

LOL, make sure the next time that you write a Harvest Moon Fanfic, you eat tons of sugar! _ This story was so funny! :D

Hey! This kinda sounds like something me and my cousins wrote one time! It was really funny, but I never finished it, so I never posted it. Anyways, I like your story, it's hilarious!

.~Lady.~

That was da funniest story I've ever read! Heehee. Great job! Keep your sugar intakes high!

that was so funny im still laughing. . if your going to write more storys have lots of sugar. lol.

*points to the part with Zombie Jeff* You're a Simpsons fan... Am I right, or am I right?

this was funny and awesome... o.O.o i have 3 eyes

Although this story lacks what I do, it has potential to rule the world with a pickle and an onion wearing tomatoes, ketchup and celery. Also included is a nice piece of lettuce and cabbage with raisin-flavored sock sauce dipped in platinum-smelling, apple-tasting, mouth-watering slime that is made of various components of chocolate bunnies on the wrath of a water blast from Leus (Yes, Leus. Not to be confuzzled with Zeus, the thunder-slinger.) To make this completely and unwillingly long post short, It's a funny girapphe that needs to release itsself from the zoo. (Figure out what a malkavian is)

(Nice fanfic, could be longer, but not much better.)