Reviews for First Kiss
The Dark Duchess Writes chapter 18 . 8/2
Hi there,

I hope you're doing well during this chaotic time. I realize you may not use this account anymore, considering fanfics have moved to AO3 in recent years, but I'm always behind on these things.

I've been on a nostalgia binge thanks to the pandemic. (Side-note: Imagine explaining the current situation to our early-2000s counterparts!) Reading and writing fanfiction was a big part of my adolescence, and I remember reading your stories long before I even made this account. I'm pretty sure I read this story first, and it's held a special place in my heart ever since.

I've loved the story of Peter Pan ever since I could talk, and the 2003 film holds a special place in my heart. Rachel Hurd-Wood and Jeremy Sumpter had such great chemistry as Wendy and Peter, so it was especially gutting to see them part ways in the end. Maybe in the Pan universe, there's a timeline where this is how it plays out. It's the ending Wendy and Peter deserve.

All the best,
Duchess
abigailcreates chapter 18 . 2/6
I don't believe in all my years I've read a fic that has struck me more than this one. In fact, since the time years ago that I originally read it, I have been searching for it on the internet, although without luck, as I only remembered bits, and just of the epilogue. How thrilled, then, I was, to happen onto this story after reading Awakened. You are a truly gifted writer and have woven a beautiful story of coming of age and of finding love. Thank you for giving us the chance to glimpse this adventure!
Pamelamoores chapter 18 . 2/28/2019
This is the 2nd Peter & Wendy story I've read from you... both were so sweet and fun!
HonestMistaek chapter 18 . 10/15/2017
So grateful to you for sharing this beautiful, creative, sweet story! I enjoyed it so much and all the details you put in Neverland. I love how you transitioned him from an insecure confused young man to a man so sure of himself and worthy of Wendy. Thank you for this! Your writing and storytelling is a delight
HonestMistaek chapter 10 . 10/15/2017
What a great chapter and Wendy did well explaining why she would have to leave if he goes back to being a boy
Callialex chapter 1 . 7/31/2017
"Her miming of long hair and nightgown and kissy faces seemed to make some progress."

Hilarious!
Marie Allen chapter 18 . 7/24/2017
This was so lovely.

As you mentioned, him leaving Neverland was the way to go with this story, as that is exactly what Neverland is - a place for children and children's dreams.

I've spent the morning reading this story and couldn't stop. It was so sweet and the ending was perfect. I'm so glad that I came across it.
MusicGirl456 chapter 18 . 3/30/2017
It was so beautiful
I will look forward to read more stories
You are really good at writing
I love your story
Thank you for writing it and sharing your story with us :)
lanney737 chapter 18 . 1/29/2017
So I see it's been 12 years since this story was fist posted. But it doesn't matter because truly this is one of the best Peter Pan fanfics I have ever read. I shipped Peter Pan and Wendy for well over 30 years and never thought to look for fan fiction. You did a awesome job.
Kat chapter 18 . 1/4/2016
I loved this story. You really brought the place to life again, and the story plot was interesting. You made me remember why I used to love Peter Pan.
Thank you chapter 18 . 12/30/2015
I never read long stories. But I extremely glad I read this. Peter Pan is my favourite since childhood and your story was amazing. Thank you
Jocelyn J chapter 16 . 10/21/2015
I'm reading this extremely late, I see, but if you ever check this...This is AMAZING! Why couldn't you have directed the Peter Pan movie?
Guest chapter 3 . 8/16/2015
Awakenings is more satisfying in terms of smut, but overall I love this story more because the characterization, emotion and plot are all virtually perfect.
DragonCastle chapter 18 . 7/6/2015
You write these Pan fics so beautifully.

This whole bit about leaving Neverland was rather sad for me, but I do accept that it is necessary.

You're a wonderful storyteller!
fantasyfreak133 chapter 18 . 6/7/2015
I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVED IT!
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