Hi. I started reading fanfics only few years ago and only found this one yesterday. Just finished reading it ;) I think that already speaks about what i think of this story. Very captivating. Yes, powerfull!harry, however in an believable and enjoyable build up.
The goblin evil rogue group is an original take that i have not read before. A very good story, so much so that i was amazed that it is the only story, wel only hp story you wrote. Evil is not yet defeated, but the story is finished, leaving enough for a sequal.
I can only hope you ever feel the inspiration and think of a plotline that gets your creative juices flowing again and write the sequal.

wheres the sequel?

Hey, just powered through your story in the past day! And wow, it was a roller coaster from start to end! It was definitely an amazing story and I’m glad I got to read it! And though you didn’t wrap up the war or even kill Voldemort, your ending was entirely satisfying! Loved every word of it!

A very well written story - well done.

Great story

Needs a sequel

Maybe?

Keep writing as life allows

I laughed so hard. Thank u for writing it like this hahahahaha

As a fan of H/Hr, I must say that this is one of my most favorite H/G that I’ve encountered. Like others, I’m surprised I haven’t ran into your story before now, but I definitely binged it as soon as I did. Thank you for your work, truly wonderful dialogue, original plot, and foresight of what Rowling planned in some areas.

Please continue on with any story you may attempt, I’d imagine it would be amazingly received!

-AB

This was nice. I wish it had a more definitive ending but at least it wrapped most things up and you can see how everything else will finish. Though I have to say, one of my least favorite parts was Harry letting Parvati become so close to him, and acting like a lovesick fool even though he wasn’t in love with her. It was like she was using an allure like Fleur which Harry is mentally strong against. I guess I’ll just have to believe he’s out of character since it doesn’t fit with the Harry I’m more familiar with.

But what I really disliked the most was Professor Melanadray. I understand that you were just showing what really could have and does often happen with celebrities. It just reminds me of when the Olsen twins were about to turn 18 and all these guys were counting down the days until it was socially acceptable to be creepers. The predatory behavior she displayed is just so icky.

Vaguely exciting beginning. I like that Dumbledore sounds well-meaning and pretty in-character and not like a cold, manipulative asshole. Also, the reason I’m even commenting: Book!Snape has never been much for “indifferent, emotionless masks”... I’d have expected him to sneer as soon as Harry came up in the conversation. But I guess you’ll go with Alan Rickman’s version.

ooooooof

Fuck pavarti

Harry goes by portkey but hermione gets a limo? WTF

If hermione knows everything then why doesn’t she tell everyone how to defeat Voldemort?

When will you get rid of broody moody Harry?

Hope chapters get longer!

OH MY GOD! THIS WAS SO GOOD! And you captured Ginny and Harry's relationship so perfectly, which is EXTREMELY rare in fan fiction as most people write like they don't know the characters or they don't know why the character should be together if that makes any sense.