Well the idea was surely interesting, I loved how you changed the canon, and especially how you've done Kazutaka's backstory, it was what caught me off guard, that angst. The growing relationship between Hisoka and Kazutaka was really joyful to read, although I think the fight against Saki could have been done better, expanded, besides Saki's talking sounded kind of cheep, and redundant; there were a lot of skipping parts in those chapters, that didn't made much sense, as to what happened... Still Iiked the ending, didn't expected how it ended uo to them both, I loved Tsubaki's role as well... All in all, a pretty sweet fanfic!

The ending was so sad. It was also really sweet as well. I love how there was a teenage Muraki, and what he could have been like if not for his brother. I was hoping that Hisoka would have stayed with him. I love how Muraki would have been.

I loved this story so much!

I was wondering if you could please write another 'Yami no Matsuei' fanfiction story? With the pairing Muraki/Hisoka? I love submissive Hisoka! If you do decide to write the story, could you please write the Muraki that was really nice and shy, like in this story? I love that Muraki!

This is a very interesting idea you have. I don't think anyone else's ever thought about what Muraki could have been. I can't wait to see where it goes!

I dunno whether u might b able to read this but i'm gonna write it anyway.

Very awesome plot. It's sumthing out of the box. Something different. I'm amazed that you r able to come up wif a plot like this. Somehow, it took me sumtime that da teenage muraki r lovers wif hisoka. I keep imagining the adult version of muraki while i'm reading.

If yami no matsuei is coming up wif a sequel, this story shud so totally be it. Hav u eva thought of submitting this?

All the elements of a good story is in here. Suspense, unexpected turn of events, and a really good and heartfelt ending. I still can't believe that u don't like this story. It's one the best fics i've read. I've always pitied muraki for turning evil cause it's not really his fault and always wondered wat would happen if things r slightly different when saki tried to kill muraki. If this story is turned into a sequel, it would be nice to know that muraki is finally able to move past the dark phase in his life and no longer evil. Creative. Really creative.

I'll b looking out for all ur other stories. So keep writing!

I read this yesterday, then I had to go and find a nice private corner to cry in for a while... then I came back today and read it again... and now I think... I need to go visit the corner again!

Thank you.

The story is fantastic, and the ending is so sad and sweet!

I hope you dip into the Yamiverse again sometime!

*waves the fan flag*

an interesting idea that turned out to be stunning. i aplaud your brilliance

Wow, this is an awesome story! It was well written and I like how everything came full circle.

Me: wow...i feel like i'm betraying myself.

Sugar: Why? *tilts head cutely*

Me: i am a complete Tsusoka yaoi girl, but i read a Mursoka fanfic...

Sugar: so...?

Me: AND LIKED IT!

Sugar: *gasps and faints*

Spice: *shakes head* only because this Muraki was nice and sweet and innocent...

Me: Yeah, i guess so...but i still feel like i'm betraying myself

Spice: *pats shoulder* you'll get over it.

Me: *nods* i know...*looks to fainted Sugar* um...sure we wake her up? *sweat drops*

Spice: *thinks* nah...cake?

Me: CAKE! YES! *drags Spice along*

Spice: NOT SO HARD!

Sugar: *still fainted*

it would be very interesting to see a sequel to this story. my compliments

Great story, I really enjoyed the ending. :)

Wow. I cried at the end of Chp.6 when Kazutaka said that he love Hisoka. Amazing! Truly Amazing. Great idea and just wow! Arigatou for writing such a wonderful story!

JA!

~EH~

TT~~TT Such a wonderful fanfic! Poor Kazutaka...*sob*...you did a marvelous job on this. Bravo!

Thank you so much for finishing this fic! Even though it's been long since I last read it I kept thinking about it, hoping that you would continue it. I know it's been a challenge for you, but I hope you realize it's a challege completed beautifully. You have a gift to pull the reader into your world with your words. Thank you for sharing your YnM fanfic with us. I hope you'll enchant us some more in the future. Lots of luck! ;)

that was so sweet... and well written! keep up the good work and make another story! hehe...

aw, Tsuzuki is so sweet. i wish i had someone to treat me that way. its adorable. keep it up i cant wait till the next chapter if this isn't the end.