| Reviews for One Plus One |
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   Lucette De La Luna chapter 12 . 4/9/2015 YAY! MEGA-HAPPY ENDING! i enjoyed this story a lot! It was very cute! |
| Lucette De La Luna chapter 1 . 4/9/2015 I LOVE the story so far, but why is everything in bold print? |
| couroo chapter 1 . 6/17/2014 Guess: Eclipse Anyways, I like How Krayon and Meruhsae are teachers. :) |
| Senile-felineS chapter 3 . 2/7/2013 In this chapter you say that eclipse liked to consider himself to be heterosexual, and yet in a later chapter, you suggest that he had already acknowledged that he was homosexual, or at least bisexual, so why does he think that he is heterosexual? |
| Senile-felineS chapter 2 . 2/7/2013 Really like this story (i've read it before) but there are just 2 things in this chapter that bother me. First, you've characterised chris as the son of a monk, but aren't monks generally celebit? Second, when eclipse and raenef first meet, they seem to only spend a few moments together, and yet raenef mentions it being hours and they talk as if it's been hours and as if eclipse has already started teaching him (i'm just helping you apply yourself, the potential was always there). Did i misunderstand? |
| Senile-felines chapter 12 . 1/3/2013 God this story made me laugh so much. I love the idea of there being a raven in eclipses hair. |
| Senile-felines chapter 4 . 1/3/2013 Argh! What is he?! |
| Senile-felines chapter 3 . 1/3/2013 Lol, this is funny, and eclipse deserves a fan club. I know it's too late to give critisism for this story, but if you are still writing you should probably pay a bit more attention to section breaks, when you jump between situations or narrators without any indication of a change, it can be a bit confusing. |
| Senile-felines chapter 2 . 1/3/2013 Lol, french fry assult? Also, your version of eclipse sound positively yummy. flashes a wicked grin |
| mangafan29 chapter 12 . 11/4/2012 Really Reeeally great! |
| Luzon V Mindanao chapter 7 . 9/9/2012 YES! YES! YES! I'm NOT the only only who likes ErutisxChris! YAY! YAY! YAY! |
| fullmoonwolf950 chapter 1 . 10/7/2011 yay i finally found a fic about this two knuckle heads! |
| loki lee chapter 12 . 8/26/2009 LOL. great fic, loved the whole thing. especially 'Of course, then there was the time that Eclipse and Raenef accidentally managed to, through some bizarre incident, knock over the bookshelf while having one of their more passionate Moments, but that is another story for another day. Perhaps a day when the author is seventeen or older.' |
| mochiusagi chapter 12 . 11/29/2008 aw cute! |
| TheWeirdSistaz chapter 9 . 10/8/2008 I LOVE THIS! Dewd, seriously. This is possibly the best "'t's put our favourite characters into a high school situation" I have ever read! AWESOME! Seriously _ Much love x PS Keep writing! |
