Wonderfully written. A very deep insight on his thoughts. I hope you wrote some other fanfic, I'll go check immeditaly! **fingers crossed**

Beautiful, the title 'boys of the old brigade' has such a nice ring to it. Great work

BRAVO.

Love the flashbacks, excellently told, but love the heartiness of the toasting scene far more. I want wizarding darts.

James is fabulously done, but I really like the supporting cast. You bring new life to the Marauders, and I really appreciate bringing in, you know, OTHER FREAKING PEOPLE IN THE ORDER. I love a good Order story. :-)

Thanks for the read!

I've got to say- I'm not really one for song/poem fics because they can just be done so wrong but I love what you did hear. It was somber and moving.. Introspective and truly poetic.. It's a job well done and I want to read more ;-)

I like your characterization of James here. He seems much more real, believably so, than most portrayals would have him. The way I see it is that he is indeed very brave-brave enough to know what scares him. The insertion and choice of poem gives this piece a surreal quality for me. I loved it, I really did.

YES YOU DO you sense a review!

is so ...Emotional?... I loved it well done!

That was an AMAZING one-shot! I loved the way it was written. It was so...deep, I guess. Who knew that James could be so thoughtful? Great job. I am thoroughly impressed.

ok then. that's just plain weird.

That was fantastic, but a bit hard to understand in some parts. Otherwise, I loved it! Like the song, as well.

Cheers,

Charlotte Donahue

PS

I love Ireland! I'm Irish. Kudos.

Oh I think I want to cry. Him thinking about all this even with Sirius making a Sirius ass of himself with his drunken antics...

Fucking brilliant. It gave me chills.

Oh, but it's so sweet.

Oh, but it's so sad.

Oh, but it's so in-character, which definitely belongs up there with lists of traits that I value enormously, especially in Marauder-era fics, because those characters are so often pigeon-holed into stereotypical roles.

Oh, but I write to many long and slightly rambling sentences.

Suffice it to say I very much enjoyed your fic, and the poem truly added to it. I'm all for nostalgia, and this evoked a real sense of that.

Sirius was wonderful, as were all the Marauders really.

And on that note I will abruptly end this review, as I can think of nothing witty to say whatsoever. :)

~ AmazinglyMe

That was so perfectly beautiful...I must say, I love the Sirius/James friendship bits the most, but that may be only because I live and breathe SJ friendship. The rest is so picture perfect meer words cannot describe...it left me feeling both satisfied, happy, and bittersweetly depressed. Congrats:P Great job!

you've made me cry.

very well-written...and sad, but i suppose it is supposed to be sad. lily and james have such a tragic story, don't you think?