Really really good! Please make a sequel, idk what but something like Max had a bad day at work and Logan was there at home or something?

-RC

I love this whole story and have read it several times, but this part:

“Max had never considered Logan Cale perfect. His imperfections were loved as much as the rest of him; without them, and his ability to frequently overcome them, he wouldn’t be the same man. He was perfect for her, and that was what mattered.”

...is one of my very favourites ever, not only in your stories but in DA-fics in general (and I think I’ve read most of the M/L-ones), it pictures the special-ness of both of them and of their relationship so very beautifully.

sigh. so sweet. i love it.

m... I want a bacon sandwich RIGHT. NOW.

Seriously, I had no idea that it was even possible to make mayonnaise sexy. Well done, mouse.

That was really cute.

wow. i know you're new at this, but you should definitely continue! that was amazing lilmouse!

Sorry I took so long to read this it was brilliant

And the last part about throwing away the boxes so opposite to her throwing things on her bike to go.

One thing if you had spaces between the people speaking it would have been a lot easier to read.

not sure if that was from FFN or on purpose.

hope you get your other stories posted. You write really well. Love your little ditties on DAVH

I'm so glad you've started to write DA fic! I enjoyed this-it was very satisfying. Best parts: the humorous lines & commentary, the emotional and visual descriptions, and the love that is very evident between Max and Logan, who are both in character. Please write some more fic soon. :)

This is very very very good. I love it. I'll see more stories from you, right? RIGHT?
Great work.
J

I just loved it! It was romantic and sweet. Good job, and I hope to read more wonderful fics from you.

AW...
Great story, its hard to come by a good m/l stories these days. Okay its 2:30 in the mornrng so im goin to bed now
AWESOME STORY!

That was great story! I hope you write more! Your Max and Logan exchanges were perfect!

awesome story i really enjoyed it! you're right the virtual s3 series was awesome but i love the 'inspired by' stuff too. so please write more because its good and i'll read up the great work!

That was an absolute joy to read. Beautifully written. In fact, I'll pobabably have to go back and read it again :)
Max had never considered Logan Cale perfect. He is imperfections were loved as much as the rest of him -Loved this line. We all love Logan's imperfections! lol
I like the way you touch on his decreasing mobility - very moving. In fact I loved the wole thing! What a great start to my day :) Thanks !

that was great! your writing style and the dialogue were perfect. you captured Max and Logan perfectly. it's very refreshing to read such an enjoyable and well-written story. thanks for sharing your work!
~beth