Nice character analyses. Thank you.

I just read this and I have to say - it is a beautifully written tale. I was somewhat surprised as I looked at the date - and even a decade ago - you still capture the underpinnings of the bond between Kal-El and Diana extremely well. Of course with Superman / Wonder Woman now an official couple - this story IMHO should also be part of the Diana / Clark collection

As a big Diana / Clark shipper - very well done ...

Hope you write some more stories on those lines ...

This story was a quiet gentle whisper, so many possibilities...

Wow, I really liked that story! It was really AWESOME! It was funny how Hawkgirl was teaching Flash that song, and singing in Thanagarian and stuff. ;) Keep up the great work!

~Miles3~

An excellent exchange of visions of what could be and it was not if they were allowed to take for the pain.

Very good work.

So sweet.

Excellent, as always.

First, I'll explain that, as a Christian, I'll use the word 'sin' to describe a wrong action. Anyway, I like the way you considered the relationship between the urge to sin, or temptation, and committing the sin. The fact that it is the reaction to temptation that speaks to the nature of the person. As a Christian, when I look to Jesus Christ as Saviour, and offer prayers and ask forgiveness for sins committed, I know He understands temptation, because he experienced it. He simply refused to give in to temptation.

"The important thing is that we do stop before we cross them-not that we’re tempted to cross them." Those are the words that (I assume) you put in Superman's mouth, and it is so true.

A great job, even compared to your other work that I've read.

Excellent.

Ya J'onn! You did a great job, good story!

BEST STORY I HAVE READ SO FAR!

Lovely. I liked how Superman would have done something bad too. More stories please. Great stuff. RG.

That was quite well done! I liked how you managed to keep everyone in character, especially J'onn, He's tough to write for, and I'm impressed by anyone who can do it well. This was a neat exploration of Diana's possible state of mind after confronting the idea that she'd almost been driven to kill in cold blood and felt very true to the series and the character and that's honestly the highest praise I could give you on this. In short, ya done good and I hope to see more from you soon! _

*giggle* I never thought of that, HEat vision everclear flamethrowing. . . COOL!

I liked the story! :D It was hilarious at the beginning! You kept everyone in character too! w2g!

You have captured J'onn quite well here, better than most people have been able to do so.
As always, bravo, and continue!