I wanted more!

O...that is good. Will you write more? Another chapter? Maybe more chapters? Please...?

I like it, except that I think that in the end, Luke should have dumped Nicole and gone after Lorelai.I loathe Nicole

But other than that, great

I loved it. The ending is kinda a cliffhanger though but I still loved it. You should start a new paragraph when you change speaking though. It gets confusing if you don't. The writing was really good though.

Is this gonna continue? Pleassee! Okay, sorry, I admit that is pretty annoying. I love how protective Luke is of Lorelai in this story! Bye now.

~*~Britt~*~

wow...that was really good. theres not much else to say but...wow...that was really really good!

Oh gosh, that was awesome. I loved it. Wow.

Poor Lorelai...bad days SUCK. As for Nicole - she's *blind*. It's so unbelievably obvious that Luke and Lorelai're in love it's insane...but you already know all that.
Hmm...I feel a second chapter coming on...*hint hint*...

Wow! I didn't think it was possible, but every story I've read by you has been better than the previous one! This story reminded me why I'm such an L/L shipper. You're awesome!

I'm a bit speachless. This was simply a delight to read from start to finish. Everything was so vivid and everyone was so in character that it feels like I watched it. I can't even pick a favourite part, but Coop's certainty on Luke and Lorelai's relationship would definitely be a contender. I was a bit surprised that you didn't give us the sappy happy ending that we were expecting, but once I thought about it I have to agree that it wasn't really necessary. We all know where it's going and it would have taken you too long to get there. This is just that one day and it's perfect. You continue to impress me and I look forward to all your future works.

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WOW! I'm amazed! This is really a wonderful piece - you've got a HUGE amount of talent! I wish you would consider writing another chapter or two... C'mon, you can't leave us hanging like this! What about the big knock-down-drag-out between Luke and Nicole? What about Emily? So many threads, just pick one up and start telling the tale - you're so good at it, you know you wanna... :-)
One comment: It's good form to start a new paragraph every time you change who is talking. Putting dialog for two different characters on the same line can be difficult to read sometimes.

Wow - this story got heavy fast, but you did warn me in the beginning. I have to say, this grabbed my heart immediately. I love the way you wrote Luke's reaction to Lorelai's incident with the inn guy, and even more so when Nicole arrived, and Luke was still comforting Lorelai. Please keep going with this!

This was a really well written story!

THAT WAS COMPLETELY AND UTTERLY AWESOME. PLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEASE TO THE ONE MILLIONETH POWER CONTINUE THIS AND MAKE THE GUY COME BACK SO LUKE HAS TO RESCUE HER OH PLEASE OH PLEASE.