i thought i was the only one who thoght about a swamp village

Ino is a female Kenpachi Zaraki.

While I hate to criticize you, especially since you've abandoned the Naruto fandom and there is no hope of a conclusion to this, I still feel I have to say that this story takes way too much focus off of Naruto. Basara, The Hidden Marsh, and many other new twists you've added all intertwine with Naruto and his destiny, yet so far all you've done is have Ino reenact scenes Naruto should be doing and subverting all the things that made Naruto what he is with Ino. It's as if you're writing Ino to be the new main focus of the Naruverse while claiming thru the Marsh Village and other places that he's still the main focus. It's all very contradicting.

I really enjoyed reading Twisted Fates. It was a huge sigh of relief from the usual works people do. :] Plus, Maki's just plain adorable and Ino kicked butt. (

Ino/Saku pairing please.

I love this story... too bad it's not being continued... not trying to say this in the wrong way, but sasuke has already killed itachi... and now that he's joined akatsuki, he's PROBABLY going to die very soon... then i'll be happy and party lots p... but anyway, hope your muse decides the black hole of suck becomes just the black hole... anywho, seeya

I have to agree with you. I mean, we wait 90 or so filler episodes and the suspense gets to a climate and then... we get that load of junk?Seriously WTf?

Oh no! My friend...anything but the yaoi said in your profile that the yaoi fangirls can have it for all you care? You're just pissed off and dont mean it.

Even if kishimoto makes sasuke madara's bane,you should not surrender fandom to the yaoi fangirls. This is why fandom exist. You must keep your cool about this. You cant just up and leave because things dont go your way. This is what fandom is for. To bring diversity to cannon and justice for some people. Your grief is nothing to Harry Potter pairing shippers. I have known people who became sucidal or lost their jobs because "HMS Harmony" sunk into the ocean and JK decided to crown "The Good Ship" See my friend,they even have official titles for pairings and HP has the biggest fandom just in and probably more than any other fandom that exist.

This is what fandom is for. If one day when you come back and read this review, you should just leave this story here ,even if it is too remain a graveyard story. Dont delete it. Belive me, maybe someday you will regret it. Maybe someday you might even continue it...if not...at least let it be your tombstone and your last tribute.

hm it needs an update

Hey! Look, I know that the manga has lost your faith, but that isn't really enough of a reason to just stop in my eyes. So the manga was your muse? Find another one! There are tons of good Naruto fanfics on this site alone, let them be your muse.

I wish you wouldn't quit, 'cause you're really good. Just because you no longer support Naruto, it doesn't mean you have to stop writing the fanfics. That is what this site is for, to do a show our way. Am I right?

Too bad you're not going to continue this, it's really fascinating. I also like your LaBlue Girl/Naruto cross that you never finished. Hope you come back one day.

cool, I like it. Keep up the good work.

Ahh! This is the first of its kind that I've seen - I haven't seen this concept employed before.

It's actually very refreshing - even with the confusing OCs (I eventually got the Marsh Village down, but Moon is confusing me :O)

I don't really mind that it's Ino-centric any more, even though I would like so see some more Team Seven-ness. I'm sad that you've discontinued this fic - to hell with it all, I say! Just pick up the pieces from the pre-timeskip. :]

Very original reason for the fox's attack. I like it.