Reviews for The Last Step
Guest chapter 6 . 1/4/2015
I loved that the chunnin kept appearing right in the middle of lee and nejis games :'D
It was so funny!
AlmaSiMangaka chapter 1 . 12/12/2014
This is the greatest Naruto fanfic I've ever read, seriously, you've got talent. I'm an indonesian, but I can understand pretty well. I love your work, and please continue _
jamester56 chapter 9 . 7/7/2011
cute.
Shanice chapter 9 . 11/13/2010
This is a very promising you need to update a fan of this story I am , and try to iron out the couplings a bit more.
1412 karasu chapter 9 . 10/14/2010
Naruto isn't doing a whole lot of training. His time has been sucked up, but he still should take SOME time to train, right?

I probably could go on a minimini rant about Narutos age, but I guess it's important for his team.

Despite my complaints, your story is really good. Please update eventually. :)
1412 karasu chapter 8 . 10/14/2010
... You DO realize that Mokuton is a Kekkei genkai, right? 0.o
Mangafreak chapter 7 . 3/4/2010
this was probably one of the best stories that I have ever read. You made it so close to the manga it is scary. Keep up the great work!
LadyChaos1011 chapter 9 . 10/11/2009
I think this is the BEST Naruto fanfic I have ever read! Even if it has been over five years, I implore you to go on.
Weaponized Mind chapter 9 . 11/5/2008
This fic is great! Though i did notice one thing, wood jutsu's are bloodline jutsu's. in the anime they are at least, though i guess there could be somthing that allowed people to use them, though the anime is skectchy on it. anyway I love this fic and I desperately hope you continue updateing (cheaching last update). wait I just checked and you havn't updated since 0'4! WHAT! please update, I like this fic and would hate to see it go under. keep up the good work. :)
shirookamiinu chapter 9 . 9/30/2008
so r u giving up on this story? i hope not...i really like the relationship between naruto and kutsu. btw...who is his father? for some reason i thought that it was orochimaru.
Vixkill chapter 9 . 9/16/2008
yo, great story. i'm looking forward to it continuing. good luck with finding time to update around life. also, it's a good idea to save copies of stuff as backup in different devices such as in a USB or floppy disk, that way if something fails it won't be quite as devastating.

thanks!
Kryspix chapter 9 . 3/8/2008
its s hame you dont seem to be updating anymore, because this is a fantastic story! i hope taht one day you do decide to come back to it :D
killer sandman chapter 9 . 1/6/2008
great story. i think that branching out into the Jounin exam did well in my opinion. wonder who Kutsu trained with if anyone.
Stumpilicious chapter 9 . 11/26/2007
good story

you're on my favorites. Could you review my story. I need someone who I respect to critique me
withbothhands chapter 9 . 10/21/2007
Well.

I suppose life is pretty cool.

I'll tell you when I start actually /doing/ something with mine. D

I noticed that you said Naruto got water "on everyone"(during his bathing scene... mah -drools-). Who was there? Was it a subtle hint that someone was watching him? Are they as hot for anime characters as I am?

Or perhaps it was just an error.

THE WORLD MAY NEVER KNOW...
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