This was an incredibly graphic and a very powerful story. I am really impressed. I really ilked it and had a blast reading it. Your descriptions are really good especially the ones describing feelings.
Keep up the great work! :D

Love this. I would like to hear what edd thinks on the subject. Like when She's in his house and stuff.

this is a good story just the type of romance ppl need to see realtiy it was a very good story

Interesting story, a "bit" gross,but this is the thing which make it more deep.

Great story i give it a 10 it was great write more you are good. you made my heart rush with this story. good job. i am happy at how good you are.

VERY well written storyline!

I must applaud you for this great story!

I'm happy it ended well.

The best story I have ever read! You deserve a medal! I almost cried when marie tried to kill herself and Eddy trying to murder her. My complaments are really hard to get so this is a really great honer for you! Keep up the great story work!

WOW!

Love it!

I almost cried near the ending.

I have to say that this is a neat idea for a story, and I really enjoyed the begining. After a while I couldn't finish becuase of the formatting. Dialog needs its own returns and indents. Also, you start almost every sentence with I. Given that this story was written in 2004, I trust that you've improved since then. You did make me look at the Kankers in a diffrent light, and I do really appreciate that.

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WOW.

Good. Dark, but good.

It nearly made me cry, suicide is a serious issue nowadays, and should not be taken lightly.

Aside from a few gramar errors and several spelling errors, a good and enjoyable story. Kinda.

OMG, This Has To Be The Best Fanfic I've Ever Read On The Ed, Edd And Eddy Catagorie! And That Coming From Me Is An Enormous Compliment, I Mean It, Plz, Plz, Plz Write More! I Know The Date On This Is Like 3 Years Ago, So I'm Not Expecting You To But I'm A Big Fan Of Edd/Marie And Fanfiction Has So Few Of Them :'(. Once Again, Plz!

Perhaps one of the most emotional, inperspective stories I have ever read. Being a fan of Marie, this story really had an impact on my perspective on her. Very good interpretation.

The storytelling was near-flawless, with good progression and a bit of cruelty to add to the morbid theme. The climactic torture scene with Eddy nearly made me sick - that's how well it was described (and seeing as how Eddy is my favorite character, it's kind of hard to think well of him right now! Haha). Your grammar was off at a few points, but I personally did not care; it was the story that mattered.

Amazing work, and definitely worth my time.

...Very interesting story. Very bloody, and somewhat scary towards the end. Never really been a big fan of the Kankers, but this one... touched something inside of me. I'll never watch Ed, Edd and Eddy the same way again.

Keep up the wonderful work.

AJ Halk

Aw What A Cute & Sad Story Of Edd/Marie

Except for a few grammar error's... but hey thats it...

I Will Forever Ship These Couple.

I really hope CN Pairs them up in like the very last episode )

All For Now,

~PixieQueen32~

Fantastically inspiring and simply amazing. I am a big fan of Edd, and naturally I always envisioned him as a love attractio to Marie, who I noticed seemed to prefer him over the other Eds.

Your story portrays Edd amazingly in-character, and even threw in the suggestion of him being a caring, loving human being, and hopefully, Marie is strengthened by this experience with her love. However wonderful the story is, though, you have a couple of errors.

The most noticable is the grammar, which is easy to re-do. Also, the whole torture moments (Eddy's was fine) were hasty and not theatrical enough. Marie should have been tied up in order to compliment her fear, humiliation and helplessness.

Still, it is a very amazing story. Forgive me if my tips are disgustingly accurate, I just have a thing for bondage.

God bless ya soul,