Reeeaaaally inconvienient trying to read Metal's dialogue,

It was really hard to translate binary on a tablet. But I really liked this fanfic!

(Yeah, i hope i am not bothering you with a 12 years too old comment.)

Wow, this was a great story! Well, minus having to translate the binary. I had to type in each and every 0 and 1 until I found out how to copy-paste this. You could probably write the translations down at the bottom of each chapter, it would make it easier for everyone reading this story! But, you know, it's your choice.

I think it's unique that you kept the binary code as Metal Sonic's way of speaking, but it gets really inconvenient to keep switching between the story and a binary translator, especially on mobile. I'd appreciate it if you changed it, or at least provided translations, but I understand if you don't.

right... I forgot about binary translations. No matter. me gusta!

what a TWIST!

but seriously, an obscure ship tossed in? If this was a little better spaced, it would be perfect. As is, it's very good. Sad that so many people don't take a close look at StH fics due to prejudice.

So tragic... DX *WAAAAAA!*

It's frustrating not knowing what the 0's and 1's mean... DX

Aw, great. Thank you, you have now created an ocean of tears in my bedroom. Well done, as I have a heart of metal.

All in all, this is a good, well written story. Granted, a few words were misspelled, but I've seen far worse. The binary thing was slightly annoying, but the story wouldn't have worked without it. I do have a question, though: Why was Metal able to speak english after he powered up?

That aside, this was very well done. Thank you for this great fanfic, and good luck to you in the future.

the end of this chapter made me tear up (':

You know what's really sad? What Metal Sonic should realize?

(In background) What?

There's only one Sonic the Hedgehog...

(In background) We knew that.

I'm not finished.

(In background) ?

There is only one Sonic the Hedgehog and there is only one Metal Sonic. Even though his creation was built to match Sonic's his body is still different, he is still a different being. Metal Sonic; probably the most confused character of all. Maybe someday he'll realize who he is and how special he is.

(In background) Aww does May-bay have a crush on Metal Sonic?

What? No! That's all you- That's the last time I open up to you! Anyway, great fic, sad fic, liked it.

to much binary

wee! I liked it!

What';s he gunna do!