This ended on such a sweet note. It would have been interesting to see where the posting went, but it feels very settled and amiable. I’m very glad I read it.

I started this without realizing it was unfinished. It’s been years, but I used to read your work on Ashwinder. I’ll bookmark this story in the hopes that you come back to it.

Well, that was unsatisfying. This was very nicely written, but the build-up over 26 chapters resulted in like two paragraphs of nondescript, and rather bland rated-PG romance. The plotting and storyline were great, but it ends in the middle of the story with no resolution and no updates since 2016. This could have been a fantastic fanfic, but alas... As it stands, I’m left feeling rather unfulfilled.

highly enjoyable and very entertaining story. I love the interaction between Hermione and the men around her including the Malfoys.

Lol! This cracks me up EVERY time!

WHAT ABOUT THE MARRIAGE LAW!? THIS IS NOT A PROPER ENDING!
It is a happy ending, but not quite a proper one. I am very sad...

Yay! Sassy Harry is queen lmao

Loved all the plotting! Such a fun story.

I love the warmth of their growing friendship and romance.
I'm impressed by the way you handle time better than any author I've ever read. You are a complete maestro about scene changes, flashbacks, segues. Thank you for writing and sharing this story. It's just as much fun after all these years an multiple readings.

In this chapter Snape is an older and experienced partner, but when they had sex he seemed to be a virgin who had never touched a vulva and who suffered premature ejaculation.

I love this story, but it is obvious you wrote it over a long period of time, perhaps writing several stories at the same time, and confusing them. Hermione's first sex partner seemed to be a Muggle, then Seamus, then someone not at school. Then Seamus is at school, and she looks him up and down, then critically compares his Gryffindor lack of sexiness to (Snape's) Slytherin sexiness. And Snape somewhere mentions Seamus' mother setting an important legal precedent. Snape goes from being as old a purebred family, to suddenly having a father who did not leave the family when he learned about magic, to being an old purebred family again, as old as the Malfoys, but not as wealthy.

Ha! Lessons from Snape.

Great, great chapter, that one. Conspiracy is entertaining.

Lol. I'd forgotten the door etiquette.

I love the sass and banter whenever these two get together. Your story never seems like a Mary Sue, which honestly is a compliment I've never given anyone else.