i hope the Auto-bots will get to hear what truly happened to the Moon kingdom, i hope that Tuxedo mask is in this story as well.

I think Bumblebee and Mina makes a great team! Oh make a monster show up and kidnap Mina.

More chapters please!

I was wrong: not "Supreme Moon Meditiation" but "Moon Gorgeous Medidation"

There's only something I noticed:
- Mina began to pull from her coat pocket her star transformation stick so she could change into her Sailor Scout form.
Then she raised her stick high into the air and shouted, "Venus Star Power!" ... She then lowered her finger and it began to light up brightly.
The robot looked at it and said, "What's that?" Venus smirked and said, "It's my... Crescent Beam Smash!"- When is this FF settled? between a Saior Moon series and the following one? or after teh last one, Sailor Moon Stars? at the end of this one, haven't the girls passed to their Super Sailor forms? think that after, we'll see also sailor saturn, that fights for a little in the 3rd series (Sailor Moon S) and, then, in the 5th one. in the last transformation, aren't the pens/sceptres sphere-shaped instead of star-shaped as in the 2nd series? and aren't these their attacks:
Sailor Moon: Supreme Moon meditation
Sailor Mercury: Mercury Aqua Rhapsody
Sailor Mars: Mars Sniper
Sailro Jupiter: Jupiter Coconut Revolution
Sailor Venus: Venus Love-and-Beauty Shock
Sailor Uranus: Space World Blaster

- "But Serena, don't you remember how many enemies we've had that first acted like that? We could be falling straight into another trap like that." Raye replied.
Amy recurred, "But do you remember that some of those enemies soon became good? Maybe this robot is already good."-
The fact that you say that some enemies have already become good, and the fact that MANY among the the Senshis' enemies become good (idNephrite, Ail and An, the Ayakashi Sisters, Princes Diamond and Zephir, Nehellenia, Sailor Galaxia) make me think that most of the Sailro Moon adventures have already took place... so, when we settle this FF? what characters could have the Senshi already met? who don't they know yet? (tis advice is just not to name these characters if the senshi don't know them yet, making an anachronism)
[they became good thank also Serena, who tried to make them reflect and won by rhetoric, not only killing them, think most of them were good before being corrupted by evil or before choosing bad ways to do what they wanted: here's a good quality in Serena! :-)]

If we think that teh senshi's adventures are settled maybein the '90s, it means that most of the time between
There's also a thing: don't the Senshi know anything at all about the Cybertronians? it seems to me a little improbable. The robots are known in part of the world already in 2nd season of their series (ep. "Enter Nightbird", "Kreemzeek!")... maybe at least Amy and the eldest girls could have hard about them, by the newspoapers, the TV, hearing about them by other people...
Will we also meet Spike, Carly... maybe also little Daniel? in the '90s, he could have been born...
Please please update soon! :-) I'm too fond of this FF: a pleaseful mix of fantasy and science fiction as it already happened in a TF G1 episode "Sea change"

oooh Sailor senshi meet the Transormers G1? I don't want to lose this! I'm ll pass soon to read it, it's promising well already! Bye! :-)

interesting

you no, there are some thing that Sailor Moon and The Transformers have in cumin, the Silver Millennium of the Moon and the Golding Age of Cybortron, The Silver Cristal and The Matrix of Leadership, maybe you can make a enemy that can only be Defeated wine Sailor Moon and Optimus Prime combined the powers of The Silver Cristal and The Matrix of Leadership, the powers of love and friendship with the wisdom of the ages.

So ar ya gonna have the girls go to Cybertron? And just where're Spike,Carly, and Chip Chase? I pressume they're in the major cities along the area of Mt. Saint Hillary (the space craft Ark's crash site). How soon can you update the story cuz the fic needs more robot fighting actiona and is just getting good. PS how long does it take for a new member's newly uploaded story to show up? I searched but it didn't show. Maybe some writeer who's tech savy could lend a hand hmm?

This is nice. Robots in Disguise and the Pretty Soldiers. I wanna what's the timeframe i mean Sailor Moon's events took place from 1992 to 1997 while G1 took place from (cartoon i'm assuming here?)1985 to 1986 while the '86 film took place in

2005 so thata leaves another decade for aadventure. I wanna see Carly, Spike and Chip Chase in this and maybe have the girls go to Cybertron. Just ideas here. I gots svral ideas of my own to upload they cross Elvin Lied and Transformers. Bye for now.

Just read your story and I got to say, it kicks ASS! Please start writing it again! I love SM and Transformers and this story slams both into a perfect mix.

This is...really good actually, I'm surprised how ell you melded these two.

It makes me giddy that the scouts finally met a real enemy (I like Sailor moon, but it was always too soft for my taste)

Can't wait for Chapter 4.

(Megatron Voice) Make It, I command it!

This is pretty impressive.

You seemed to merge the two worlds very well.

Know that the Transformers do carry an artifect that can rival the powers of the silver crystal (obviasly the Matrix of leadership you know the thing that has the downloaded memories and personalities of every autobot leader on Cybertron)

I wonder if one of the Sailor's ememies would try to make a deal with the Decepticons to help eliminate their enemies in exchange for energy. But that is unlikely.

I wonder how the other Senshi is going to take the fact that there is something of earth that they did not know about. (Especialy the time girl who's name escapes me at the moment and rini)

Nice! The fight scene with Megatron is pretty cool. Nice work. I can't wait for chapter four.

Nice fic, well written lots of action too. You obvioulsy know your crossover stuff. This was an awesome read. Although. I dont know too much about transformer but I've seen the show for abit. Hats to you.