Eggs and ketchup (or salsa, diced tomatoes...) go well together.

I've never heard of red vinegar but it probably adds some spice.

So I agree, it is not a bad meal.

Sorry, but what the Hell is up with the formatting in this chapter? It's all broken up. Makes it REALLY hard to read.

Wow, that was surprisingly good. Nice ending,too.

That was great - thank you!

I just discovered that this story was finished!
(Yes! It took me THAT long…)

I had a great time reading this story!

Thanks for sharing!

kinda interesting story, but the whole relationship between chiyeko and atsuke is just incredibly forced and artificial. story would have been way better without it.

So wonderful.

Great story. Now only if your other fics were as long.

So, umm 17 years he's supposedly been a t war with the Amazons and he hasn't done shit? Doesn't sound much like a war and doesn't sound much like Ranma. The fic sounded good but I hate fics that have insanely large plot holes to start with that you have to try to ignore. If you can't manage a good start then why should anyone believe the rest of the fic will be worth reading?

Atasuke is a creep, I really hope Chiyeko won't end up with him and that he doesn't get away with his peeping ways for too much longer.

Hmm, I don't know if you'll get this review, but I happy that I finally had the time to read this and actually finish it. Every other time I've read it before, I've not been able to do so. Well, thanks for writing this, and goodbye for now.

Wow very fun story glad I came across it. And really glad for the happy ending... so to speak.

Great job on this interesting and unique story!

Merp. Issues with formatting in this chapter. Weird "?" seem to be popping up everywhere and the paragraphs are obviously word wrapped manually.

Oooooo that sound incredibly...kinky...is it Ranma with her/him self? :3