You promised you'd update over a decade ago sis. Whyyyy have you left this splendid gem unfinished? It's a tragedy.

Oh I love this! Makes me want to reread the series.

You've managed to soften me on Alanna/Jon, and that took some doing, I didn't even care for it in the book.

How could you leave it here and call it complete...I want the moment when it is all revealed to Gary. This sucks :(

I don't care that's it's "completed"

It's so funny! Seriously, would you pleeeease write something more to it. It was hi-la-ri-os! ...please?

I love these. The last one in particular.

I love it! But will Gary and Raoul find out? Because I really want to know their reactions! It'll be hilarious. Please add more to this story or write a sequal!

~Vampiremuggle

vampiremuggle at gmail dot com

update soon

Hello hello.

Do you still exist here on FanFiction? And are you likely to be updating this story ever again? Because it's really very good!

Just a short plea.

great story! you should put up another chapter when gary finds out who Jon's new 'lover' is!

this is really funny. u should keep going to where alanna tells gary shes a girl.

This is great! Please update!

Amusing and well written. I'm still shocked at how many of the Tamera Pierce writers write well. I've always been an obsessive over the Song of the Lioness quartet. They were always my favorite and I love the Alanna and Jon pairing. I never liked George much.

Tabitha of MoonAurora

It seems as if you've given up, but this a good story, and really quite hilarious. It would be extremely neat if you would start it up again...

awesome!