Awesome story. I really liked te Squinoa action you put in here and it's my favorite part of the story aside from Rinoa totally kicking ass. By the way, as a Jiu-jitsu practitioner, could you tell me what do you mean by bar choke? A rear naked choke or the marine style of it using the fore-arm instead? Sorry but it is kind of stuck there now.

Interesting way to rope in some FF7 elements with Materia and all that and I really enjoyed how you used it to power Rinoa up more.

A sequel looks promising but hey this is ok on it's own.

Cheers

Keep Writing

Great Story... Although some parts are... Nevermind. I still thought that your story was great and just so you know I added you on my fave author's list and this story to my fave story list...

.Freakin'.Awesome! P

I really loved how you potrayed everything within this story. Sure... it's a tad bit short, but nothing was ever rushed. It just flowed along. Kudos to you. )

By the way... if it's even possible for me to even have a softer spot for Squall (No... not in THAT way), you just made me have it... heh... He's a charming fellow.

_ I'm definately putting you down to favourites and alert.

PSST! time to update "The Wrong Way" too. ;)

Go Rinoa and Squall. XD I really love your style in writing. _

Great fic! I loved the FF7ness about it

Awesome fic so far. I'll have to read the rest later though. Sleepy time!

uhh sequel?

I thought it was good, the plot was definitely different. Vincent and Sephi appearing was just.. interesting. I wonder where they came from?.. Well, that's not really important! :P

Love the Squall and Rinoa interaction, (I knew those crazy kids would get back together, it was inevitable)nice job but I thought it ended too abruptly. There's no closure with any of the characters. :(

So what's going to happen with Eve? That wasn't a very comforting close to the ending there. No doubt it sounds like she'll be up to something again soon enough.

I think this story had a really good plot, and was very interesting to read. Suspenseful at times and angsty as well, I only wished that we got to see what went on between Squall and Rinoa behind closed doors ; ) I hope you continue to write more F.F. VI stories! : )

Eve is gone. At the end I almost felt sad for her but she was evil. She truly was and evil people get theirs sooner or later so it was just a matter of time for her. At least Squall and Rin will have a slight peace of mind after all this. Lol, the battle just ended and here I'm on about Squall and Rinoa all over again. I'm such a sap for those two; actually for all the Square Enix men, *sigh*

Eve is just plain crazy. No doubt Rinoa probably felt a little irked at the comment about how her feelings for Squall were real. And now the last battle begins. I hope Rinoa kicks her ass good.

Lol Rinoa was so normal! It was so funny to see her just jump off the bed and say, Ok guys, I ned some time with Squall now! Bah bye! Hehehe I wonder what exactly she meant, *wink wink*.

LOL I lovedd Rinoa's line when she woke up! That was funy! She probably gave everyone in the room a heart attack. Sounds like she's ok though, phew!

Oh, I eas right about Eve's eyes! So she was bad after all! At first I thought something was up with Rinoa because of her firm, commanding attitude but she was just looking out for Squall. And now the gauntlet is gone. Things are definitely picking up the pace now! Can't wait to move onto Chapter 15!

That Val guy reminds me of Vincent from F.F. VII. I haven't played that game but I've become such a fangirl of Advent Children. Btw, have you seen it?

Hm, I wonder what's really going on. Will Rinoa be okay or is she falling into some sort of trap?