Reviews for Alliances |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I *like* the fuller version - I just wish the adult content Nazis didn't scare you too much to include it here. Especially since searching for it was a right pain! (Worth it, since it was good, but still.) |
![]() ![]() Good. Good pacing of the plot with nice deep insights in the minds of the main characters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() :D Loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was alright but the bad grammar was distracting and the characters were all out of place. I realize Draco lost his memory but he didn't act like Draco, he just seemed so boring. I hated how he let Harry be a total prick to him. There was like no romance at all in this story. You should have put it in drama instead of angst/romance cause the romance wasn't there and neither was the angst, not really anyways. Also, I have to say I really, really hate that word, I was disgusted to hear 'cunt' it even hurt for me to type it. It's so not a nice word. |
![]() ![]() ![]() epic story, i love it! i hope you do a sequel! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i loved |
![]() ![]() ![]() beautiful, tragical - very nice. I have to read it again on ocassion, and I promise to write a bit more then. |
![]() ![]() ![]() crap...draco's not gonna remember dating harry is he? darn. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh my oh my oh my..that was definetly one of the best stories i have read. it is 2 fuckin 46 am in the mornin and i have read all 11 episodes in a blink. man that was awesome. i found myself laughing my ass over about a witty comment in every 5 minutes. that was neat. good job |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this story! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg loved this story it was cute and angsty! |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it.. you painted Draco so perfectly, in his cold dastardly way and i worried a bit that the end wouldn't justify.. that you would make him a total pansy.. but better yet.. you made him perfect and he's not going bonkers over being a 'mother' hows that for a poof :P wish we coulda seen Cissy's reaction :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() You said the pairing would be D/H but it seemed like Harry was dominant throughout the whole fic though its due to Draco and his memory loss making him sound all lovesick and more honest than he ever was before. But none the less I loved it though the whole mage thing only purpose seemed to be getting Draco up the duff. :] |
![]() ![]() ![]() sequel! plz i love this x |
![]() ![]() ... ... 0_o ... ... That was undoubtably one of the top ten H/D fics I've ever read. VERY nice longer version of chapter ten. Never did like Ron overly much anyway. Good epilouge and my friends and I always thought Snape acted lke a bit of a motherfucker, I just love that it was literal here! XD |