A great poem fic. Very well written.

Aw. I liked this.

Wow! You're first Fanfic? Incredible! Very well written, it had a very good rhythm and your description of the battle and the soldiers feelings was awesome. And the ending really drove it home. Very very good.

I love this. It's very emotional. And very much like...who it's about. Write more!
Best of luck,
Namarie,
Calime

Wow. I must say that this is one of the saddest poems I have ever read. This is not happy at all. It is also very well written. I love how the descriptive language makes a lingering picture in my mind. But this is very sad.

hmm. What can I say interesting! Very interesting Get yourself a beta ask a round. Like me email me u no who I am. Your favorite secret, annoying yet very brilliant might I say genius of best friend!

Éowyn right... nice style overall

I'M THE FIRST ONE TO REVEIW! YES! Finnally, i got somewhere first! anywho, its really good. Normally, I don't like the poems people write based on books and movies, but you did it good! And that is a big complement from me. Usually, poetry is evil and must me tossed into Mt. Doom. G2G!