I haven't gotten so far into it... but Sesshomaru is such a douche (just like he is in canon, I suppose lol). As much as I held a fascination for the bully-turned-love interest because of the whole thing about a boy picking on a girl he likes, he's just so... meh in here. *sighs* I'm actually rooting for Naraku on this one .

Naraku...*hiccups* don't be mad at me anymore... *sobs* Anyway, pretty nice, although I think I forgave Sesshoumaru WAY too easily. After getting me drunk and telling on me to Naraku and KISSED me after I said that I DID mind him taking liberty with me, he surely needs to be punished in sweetest torture possible.

Love the story not too wishy washy. Its got a great feel to it hope its finished soon and look forward to buying the book.

Awesome story! When will you be writing more? Its really good

Aww! PLEASE Write More! It Is So Sweeeeeeet!

I really enjoyed reading your story. I hope that you will continue it soon. Its really funny and the love triangle is sure to keep all of the readers interested.

Interesting story...you write in a very refreshing way. (:

Hee.. Tokyo a "grey, unattractive city"? Tokyo is neon mayhem, packed with teming thousands at any given hour (or at least downtown Tokyo is!)... yet, around the corner, sandwiched between skyscrapers, you might, if you are lucky, find yourself confronting a flight of worn steps and if you follow those up, you'd pass under a torii and into the quiet, reflective bosom of a shrine compound ;)

Awesomeness! plz update this story :D

Wow... This story has really captured my interest! I read all six chapters within a two hour period. Great work! There is the occasional spelling/grammar error, but they are few and far between. And your sense of humor is astounding! To be perfectly honest, that's one of the reasons I love this story already and the plot is original (which is SO hard to find)! There is astounding potential in this story and I hope you take full avantage of it!

I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon!

update plz plz plz plz update soon I beg you. you're awesome

i really liked this AU most of the ones i come accross are not very well written, but this one is. i love what you have done with it and hope to see more. also i love Miroku you just played him a little less then he is, but you still have to love him.

Kami!that was really good..btw, is Sesshy still a demon? and when are you going to update?*whining*

aw how cute plz let them two hook up oh and plz up dat soon

PLEASE CONTINUE SOON THIS IS REALLY GOOD AND I would like to read more:):):):):):):):):):):):):):) ;););););););););););)