WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning!Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mentalhospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all thestaff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died.

Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, ona Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting youand watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, andshe will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and pastethis to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in your room

awwww *wipes away tears *

I'm crying now its even sader when you listen to the song

I hope is not done because i am sorry to say this but...I AM GOING TO KILL YOU IF THE LAST THING I DO ! oh and i really cried so you better not ended like cause I WILL KILL YOU OVER AND OVER AGAIN IF IT THE LAST THING I DO!

*sobs* the ending was sooooo sad. i'm really crying right now. WWAAAHHH! *cries*

First angst fic, and seven years later, we're still trying to keep up XD

Congrats, dude, on setting the first bar for Danny Phantom angst :)

Made me cry amazing story though

This was so good, and so sad. I'm crying. Oh, btw, I also reviewed your awesome Phoeneix Burn fanfic.

First thing before I give my review: I like Sam and I like Danny, but that doesn't mean I didn't like your piece. I do.

Okay, now for the reviewy stuff everyone likes!

Nice job with alternating between the song and the piece, it was a good song choice. Though I think you kind of used more song than was necessary (I think choosing specific parts of the song to highlight parts of your story would benefit it more).

It feels a little rushed into the tragedy bit and there's no details that says why they're in an alleyway in the rain except that Sam likes it, which I get- but the details would help to make the sudden appearance of the attacker- (I'm not sure why that person would try to shoot Danny in the first place).

Overall a well written piece and I think that anyone who gives you flack about killing off Sam needs to look at your quality rather than your initial content.

Awesome!

-Don "QuixoticQuest" )

Aw . . . SAD!

o man awsome story poor sam tears loved it though

That was beautiful!

so sad! wah!1

but so good!

Damn that man! Have to ruin the moment! *sniffle* poor sam, poor danny. Stupid man! I hope he falls off a cliff

I love that story! Make more chapters fast! *starts having a sezure because she wants more chapters*