Haha I loved this! A good prequel to the film :)

I love Hector and Paris' relationship so much, and the ending was very funny :D

Well done!

*LOL* _ I love the end line! (and the whole thing about him wanting to go there "to learn"! ;D

Nice job. Very clever. However, I would suggest that you space btween your character's quotes, because it's a tad confusing. But I liked the plot of this, it was interesting. The two brothers, their life, their relationship, their mission, etc. I liked this! Well done!

Great Story

Oh, I'm really enjoying this one! Paris and Hector have such an awesome relationship in the movie, and I'm glad you are writing about them. Please continue!

I like it

*giggles madly*
That was great! Completely revealed Paris's shallow character (though i still love him!)... and Hector's role of indulgent but exasperated older brother...
lovely work! :)

well luv, I don't think Paris is that spoiled, but 'tis your fic, fuck him blue *nudge nudge*, no, really, you know that, against my will I love it

Interesting...good description of Hector/Paris relationship...cute "ending" but i think u should keep writing ;)

he he. . . I liked that ending line:
-"You mean, about the king's wife. . . "
Neat little fic _