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Good story you shoow the sorrow of Peter and at the end the start of his joy. Sure that once he'd sorted himself out he would be back to share with his siblings the good news.

Beautiful!

Very Good! Very, very good!

That was wonderful, quite true to Lewis's.

i love this this is by far the best christian ff ever keep writing and ill keep reading

that was encouraging to see Christian authors on fan fic.

that was good i just saw the movie The Chronicles of Narnia: Prince Caspian & i love it

Go you ) I am also a Christian, and happily can understand where you're coming from.

Knowing Aslan in Narnia has helped me to better know Jesus in our world. I first had Narnia read to me what feels like ages ago, yet everytime I've returned to it I've understood more of what Lewis was saying. The Chronicles of Narnia have helped me more in my Christian walk than every devotional book I've ever read put together.

Thanks for sharing, and God bless!

I liked this. I also wondered about the children finding Aslan in their world; I kinda' wish Lewis had written those scenes, but it's rockin' that you did.

Hi! I only read the first page of reviews, but I was shocked at how many people are Christians. I am a Christian too, and I've always been curious to know how many other Christians read these fanficts. It's so cool that so many do! Anyway bout the story...I loved it! As someone else mentioned you don't see many about Peter after he and Susan find out they can't go back into Narnia. It was really cool. As soon as I read the first book I knew Aslan was being compared to Jesus. Thank you for putting it into a story. And please write more fanficts.

~Monkey~

About time someone made the connection! Well done!

BULLSHIT

Wow. I mean, I know we all knew who He was in our world, but by the second paragraph I felt like I was reading one of the books. Well done, on the tone and subject matter.

Did you know C.S Lewis was originally an atheist but became a christian while trying to disprove Christianity? Just a random fact of the day. XD Awesome story, by the way.